Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

I Woke Up On A Tropical Island

A vacation was needed,
off on a cruise we were treated.
Great cabin, food, parties and shows,
now in a chair with a book about a rose.
The seas got really rough,
off the desk went our stuff.
Into the cold water we went,
we swam like it was a swimming event.
A tropical island we did reach,
feeling like pirates we hit the beach.
The first thing we need to do,
is make shelter for me and for you.
Fresh fruit and fish both day and night,
oh my what pure delight.
The blast of a very loud horn,
we thought we were airborne.
Now awake and back in port,
our tropical island dream was no resort.

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Len Gasun August 10, 2024 at 6:49 AM It was indeed a great adventure you have had going to that island my dear poet friend. The rough sea was quite scarry especially if one like me doesn't know how to swim. I enjoyed reading your wonderful and delightful poem my dearest poet friend. Thank you so much for sharing and Congratulations as well on your win! Hugs Paula Goldsmith August 11, 2024 at 8:59 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun adventure. I wish I was on this wonderful island I wrote about. Guess I need a vacation. Hahaha!!! I can dream, right??? Hugs... Have a fun/great day writing away...............

Maria Fernandez-Garcia July 30, 2024 at 3:21 PM Congrats on the contest too. Loved your adventure poem. Very creative poem. Thank you my dear for sharing Paula Goldsmith August 1, 2024 at 10:36 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you Loved my fun adventure & found it to be a Very creative poem. It was fun to write. I wish I was on this island. Oh well, I can dream... Have a fun/great day writing away...............

Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2024 at 8:39 AM "4 Place" I Woke Up On A Tropical Island ~ Date Written: 5/28/2024 Paula Goldsmith August 1, 2024 at 10:32 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun adventure. I wish I was on this island. Guess I need a vacation. Hahaha!!!  Oh well, I can dream... Have a fun/great day writing away............... Greg Gaul July 30, 2024 at 2:17 PM What an adventure. Story well lived and well told. Congrats on your placement.

Sara Kendrick May 31, 2024 at 11:09 AM Good one. Very creative indeed. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page with congrats. Keep on writing. Sara K Paula Goldsmith May 31, 2024 at 11:13 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun island write to be a Good one. Very creative indeed. That made my day... Sure wish I was on an island watching the blue water. Oh well, I can dream... Have a fun/great day writing away...............

Janice Canerdy May 28, 2024 at 2:17 PM Very descriptive and appealing, Paula. Janice Paula Goldsmith May 29, 2024 at 9:49 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun island write to be Very descriptive and appealing. I need a vacation. Wish it could be on an island. Have a fun/great day writing away...............

Paula Goldsmith May 28, 2024 at 12:22 PM I Woke Up On A Tropical Island ~ Date Written: 5/28/2024