I Without You

What's the sun without a shine
What's a glass without its wine
What's a beach without an ocean
What's a ride without its motion
What's a car without its wheels 
What's an orange without its peel
What's a foot without a shoe
What am I without You
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 6:32 PM
cute and convincing. jhl
Ehigiator Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 9:14 PM
Very lovely write, So warm and fresh-- Creatively crafted with an interesting perspective...This piece flowed so beautifully--Love the ending, God Bless *Tyesha
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