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I Wish You'D Grow Faster

"Boy! We're gonna be the best of friends! Lying here, I watch you sleeping, I sure hope that this will not be a trend 'Cause when we play ball,the goal you'll be keeping Since Mommy told me you would be coming I've been waiting for a very long time Now each day I see how much you're growing Imagine the joy of knowing you're here and are mine! From the first moment you arrived home I've noticed when you sleep, time goes pretty slow And sometimes, you seem to sleep just like a stone! But that's ok! Mommy says sleeping makes you grow I smile as I imagine the two of us at play And picture in my mind the many things we'd learn We'll pet horses at the zoo and feed them hay Come Christmas we'll buy gifts with money we'll earn I love you, my 'lil brother, Lucas I wish you'd hurry up and grow Yes, we will be causing some rocus I'll teach you all you need to know!" ~*~
By Annalise 04/29/11 FOR: Miranda Lambert's "Brotherly Love" Contest (Inspired by photo of Logan as he watches his baby brother, Lucas sleeping)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/25/2013 5:13:00 AM
Just beautiful, what a pleasure it was to stumble upon this :)
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:58:00 AM
A sweet write on the joys of having a sibling. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/29/2011 6:00:00 AM
Awww, as cute as they come. Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Annalise.
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:38:00 AM
very cute Annalise..spoken like a true little instigator. :) congrats to you
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:44:00 PM
how sweet, annalise! . a well deserved TOP award! :)huggs!
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations Annalise on your win in the "Brotherly Love" contest sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:32:00 PM
This is such an adorable poem ....so sweet, Annalise! Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:57:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st Place win, Annalise. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:28:00 AM
Many congrats on your cute win, Annalise : )
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:18:00 AM
Just loved the ending I can see him getting the wee one in so much trouble!! Didn't we all make the baby DO IT! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your first-place win, sweet friend. So happy for you. Hope life is treating you well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on the win. Sounds like you have been there yourself. Mike
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congrats Annalise on your first place win in Brotherly Luv contest with this heartfelt entry my friend.. hope u are doing well and are happy luv.. enjoy your top spot for excellence..
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:44:00 PM
Awesome! such a beautiful piece of story telling! love it!!
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Date: 5/4/2011 5:28:00 PM
ANNALISE! thank u for this beautiful entry, I litterally am in tears still!...this is Logan to a "T"...soup mail Love, Randa bear
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Date: 5/1/2011 1:44:00 PM
Your entry really touched my heart, Annalise. Such an uplifting poem for the contest. Witty as well. Best wishes and love, Carolyn PS - I've been quite sick so I haven't been online much.
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Date: 5/1/2011 12:21:00 PM
oh anna... the warmth and sense of anticipation here are music to my ears! best winning wishes... hope you are fine!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/1/2011 11:21:00 AM
a very sweet piece of poetry, touching to the heart. enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 4/30/2011 4:46:00 PM
You did it a little better than me becuase you used their names. I probably should have done that. But I even gave them a cat named Felix. haha. This is wonderful, and I hope it does well in the contest. LUv, ANdrea
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Date: 4/30/2011 3:47:00 PM
* i love this soon to be fave * the sweetness * the empathy * the imagination * the creativity * the softness * the love * “Everything Lovely Annalise” * what a wonderful reflection of * “Your Beautiful Heart” * i am glad that i found this beautiful poetry and * “You” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah
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Date: 4/29/2011 6:28:00 PM
What an adorable poem....such love invoked! "From the mouth of babes"....tender and sweet!! Love this Annalise!
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Date: 4/29/2011 5:11:00 PM
Good one that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 4/29/2011 4:41:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write.... warms the soul to read this, which I have done like 3 times already... lovely winning write my dear ..love Michael
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