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I Wish Upon a Star

Upon my sorrow’s pillow tears fall soft, yet gentle soothing dreams appear aloft to fill my heart with promises of you, and banish lonely thoughts so filled with blue. I gaze up to the starry skies above. Upon a shooting star I wish for love ~ to fill my heart with promises of you, and banish lonely thoughts so filled with blue. I gaze once more; the stars they seem to say: "Love's wish fulfilled"; my heart knows you will stay! Protected in your arms at last I know, our love forever found will bloom and grow. Sponsor Tirzah Conway Contest Name: Shooting Stars Repitier Poem (not listed under "Form"-see notes)

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Date: 5/6/2016 10:27:00 PM
LUCRETIA CROUSE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 4:37:00 PM
lucretia crouse, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:10:00 PM
Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:34:00 PM
Great one expressing how we wish upon a star sometimes..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:31:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Lucretia xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Lucretia. Love, Carol
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/21/2012 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Carol. Lucretia xx
Date: 8/21/2012 4:18:00 AM
congrats on this winning poem, enjoyed.
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/21/2012 10:42:00 AM
Thank you harry. Lucretia xx
Date: 8/21/2012 3:33:00 AM
Lucretia big congrats on your win...David
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/21/2012 10:41:00 AM
Thank you David. Lucretia xx
Date: 8/20/2012 2:00:00 PM
Loved this form, Congrats on your 5th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/20/2012 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tirzah. :) Lucretia xx
Date: 8/18/2012 11:12:00 AM
I love that you gave yours a romantic twist. Interesting poetry form that you showcased.
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/20/2012 5:20:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this love poem, Andrea. Take care. :) Lucretia xx
Date: 8/18/2012 6:23:00 AM
What a wishful and hopeful poem Lucretia! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/20/2012 5:20:00 PM
I'm glad you found hope in these words of love, Russell. :) Lucretia xx
Date: 8/18/2012 3:07:00 AM
Love this it is melancholy but so nice a the end xx
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/20/2012 5:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Mandy. :) Lucretia xx

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