Lucretia Crouse Poet Verse

I Wish Upon a Star

Upon my sorrow’s pillow tears fall soft, 
yet gentle soothing dreams appear aloft
to fill my heart with promises of you,
and banish lonely thoughts so filled with blue.

I gaze up to the starry skies above.
Upon a shooting star I wish for love ~
to fill my heart with promises of you,
and banish lonely thoughts so filled with blue.

I gaze once more; the stars they seem to say:
"Love's wish fulfilled"; my heart knows you will stay!
Protected in your arms at last I know,
our love forever found will bloom and grow.


Sponsor Tirzah Conway 
Contest Name: Shooting Stars  
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Skat A May 6, 2016 at 10:27 PM LUCRETIA CROUSE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2016 at 4:37 PM lucretia crouse, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~

Debbie Guzzi August 22, 2012 at 6:10 PM Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love

Sara Kendrick August 21, 2012 at 3:34 PM Great one expressing how we wish upon a star sometimes..Congrats on your win..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 21, 2012 at 11:31 AM Many congratulations on your win Lucretia xx

Carol Sunshine Brown August 21, 2012 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Lucretia. Love, Carol Lucretia Crouse August 21, 2012 at 10:42 AM Thank you, Carol. Lucretia xx

Harry Horsman August 21, 2012 at 4:18 AM congrats on this winning poem, enjoyed. Lucretia Crouse August 21, 2012 at 10:42 AM Thank you harry. Lucretia xx

David Williams August 21, 2012 at 3:33 AM Lucretia big congrats on your win...David Lucretia Crouse August 21, 2012 at 10:41 AM Thank you David. Lucretia xx

Tirzah Conway August 20, 2012 at 2:00 PM Loved this form, Congrats on your 5th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~ Lucretia Crouse August 20, 2012 at 5:19 PM Thank you so much, Tirzah. :) Lucretia xx

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2012 at 11:12 AM I love that you gave yours a romantic twist. Interesting poetry form that you showcased. Lucretia Crouse August 20, 2012 at 5:20 PM I'm glad you enjoyed this love poem, Andrea. Take care. :) Lucretia xx

Russell Sivey August 18, 2012 at 6:23 AM What a wishful and hopeful poem Lucretia! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Wonderful piece, Great Work!! Lucretia Crouse August 20, 2012 at 5:20 PM I'm glad you found hope in these words of love, Russell. :) Lucretia xx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 18, 2012 at 3:07 AM Love this it is melancholy but so nice a the end xx Lucretia Crouse August 20, 2012 at 5:22 PM Thank you for your kind words, Mandy. :) Lucretia xx