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I Wish To Be

I Wish To Be

I Wish To Be
I Wish To See,
I Wish To Be A Great Big Sea
Ocean Wide
And Ocean Blue,
Oh So Bright Like
The Great Big Moon,
And Still There 
Flowing As It Is Fair...

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Lucilla Carrillo

April 10, 2014 at 12:18 AM

I think you have done great with this poem. I expect to see more. from you. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Lexy Goodluck

April 8, 2014 at 1:14 AM

This poem is fun. The rhythm is awesome!:)

Skat A

April 6, 2014 at 6:43 AM

Hi, Ariana, I wish to be, the rain.... mutual common greatness. ..luv the poem. ..Skat

Gina Montalbo

April 5, 2014 at 5:16 PM

very good for your first time... smiles and hugs.... Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 5, 2014 at 2:08 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Ariana :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

April 5, 2014 at 1:21 PM

ARIANA,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ariana Petrin

April 5, 2014 at 8:25 PM

Thank you I Enjoy Your Feedback...Ariana