I Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

I wish somebody would've told me, 
She is my only  love Dosage, 
At this old Age, 
The only person who can give a good Massage ,
While sending an important love  Message, 
To some british people who pass this Passage, 
And are content to hear other people speak their Language. 

I wish somebody would've told me, 
"No one loved me like you,"she said, 
I saw Courage. 
" I was in a hut " she said, 
I saw a lovely  Village.
" I was in town in a behind  room," she said,
I saw a beautiful Cottage. 
" I am waiting to see a ring on my finger, " she said ,
 I saw the day to Engage. 

I wish somebody would've told me,  
" I will be so excited in the church , when our pastor will pronounce ' only death that will separate you '" she said , 
I saw our Marriage. 
People marry daily , marriage is other life Stage.
Many couples  don't want  to hear about Miscarriage, 
Because It is  a big loss , losing the  fruit  from their Marriage. 

I wish somebody would've told me,  
She is my beautiful full Parkage, 
Her and children will be easy to Manage,
As I am responsable with full Courage,
Thinking to build a big house at Salvage, 
Before our traditional Marriage.

March 18/2023 
Written for poetry contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh
.....Pick-A - Title ....
Title Picked: I wish somebody would've told me. 

...Third place winning 
 in this Competition...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/26/2023 8:47:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing piece, Alfonso:-) Way to go!
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Thank you so much for your compliments. Happy as you enjoyed the poem You are welcome
Date: 3/24/2023 7:41:00 PM
Chris, many hearty congratulations on your Contest win! Spotless vibes you portray.
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Thanks so much for your compliments Your visit on my page means a lot. Your most welcome
Date: 3/24/2023 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem wonderfully written with added excitement of humor.
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Thank you so much for your compliments. Happy as you enjoyed the poem. You are welcome
Date: 3/23/2023 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Life has many twists and turns. Have a blessed day writing....................
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Thanks so much Paula, Reality of Life. Happy to read your senceful comment. You are welcome
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