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I Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

I wish somebody would've told me, She is my only  love Dosage, At this old Age, The only person who can give a good Massage , While sending an important love  Message, To some british people who pass this Passage, And are content to hear other people speak their Language. I wish somebody would've told me, "No one loved me like you,"she said, I saw Courage. " I was in a hut " she said, I saw a lovely  Village. " I was in town in a behind  room," she said, I saw a beautiful Cottage. " I am waiting to see a ring on my finger, " she said , I saw the day to Engage. I wish somebody would've told me,  " I will be so excited in the church , when our pastor will pronounce ' only death that will separate you '" she said , I saw our Marriage. People marry daily , marriage is other life Stage. Many couples  don't want  to hear about Miscarriage, Because It is  a big loss , losing the  fruit  from their Marriage. I wish somebody would've told me,  She is my beautiful full Parkage, Her and children will be easy to Manage, As I am responsable with full Courage, Thinking to build a big house at Salvage, Before our traditional Marriage. March 18/2023 Written for poetry contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh .....Pick-A - Title .... Title Picked: I wish somebody would've told me. ...Third place winning in this Competition...

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Date: 3/26/2023 8:47:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing piece, Alfonso:-) Way to go!
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Thank you so much for your compliments. Happy as you enjoyed the poem You are welcome
Date: 3/24/2023 7:41:00 PM
Chris, many hearty congratulations on your Contest win! Spotless vibes you portray.
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Thanks so much for your compliments Your visit on my page means a lot. Your most welcome
Date: 3/24/2023 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem wonderfully written with added excitement of humor.
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Thank you so much for your compliments. Happy as you enjoyed the poem. You are welcome
Date: 3/23/2023 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Life has many twists and turns. Have a blessed day writing....................
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Thanks so much Paula, Reality of Life. Happy to read your senceful comment. You are welcome

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