I Wish, Just One Time

It seems like every time I express myself to some one they take a knife and stab me in the
heart
I just wish that one time in my life that I could just find the right one and be happy for
the rest of our lives
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Riley Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Heartfelt poem, alot of true emotion, I do not think this would be Heroic couplets, maybe couplets. Please refer to the forms of poetry, this does help alot. I too have alot to learn, but I read the directions before I drive, or try to, sometimes it takes an expert. Thanks Judy Riley
Higgins Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 12:13 PM
That is the price one pay sometimes to find the needle in a haystack. This is well said and goes to heart of things I deal with. Wonderful and thanks for the comments.
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