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I Wish, Just One Time

It seems like every time I express myself to some one they take a knife and stab me in the heart I just wish that one time in my life that I could just find the right one and be happy for the rest of our lives

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Judy Riley

Date: 1/15/2009 1:54:00 PM

Heartfelt poem, alot of true emotion, I do not think this would be Heroic couplets, maybe couplets. Please refer to the forms of poetry, this does help alot. I too have alot to learn, but I read the directions before I drive, or try to, sometimes it takes an expert. Thanks Judy Riley

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/15/2009 12:13:00 PM

That is the price one pay sometimes to find the needle in a haystack. This is well said and goes to heart of things I deal with. Wonderful and thanks for the comments.