-i Wish It Wasn'T a Dream-

~~***~~ I jumped out of bed Heard a baby cry last night It was just a dream ~~***~~
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Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:07 PM
oh my, that would be so weird if it were not a dream and you did not even have a baby!!
Kalicharan Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:42 PM
This was written a few weeks after having lost a baby... Thank you for the read and comment.
Gupta Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Both fullness and emptiness ... great haiku ...
Kalicharan Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, Probir. Appreciate the read and comment!
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