I Wish

I wish at times I was a tree I would have been happy and more free I wish at times I was the rain I would have washed down all fear and pain I wish at times I was the breeze I would have been living in peace and ease I wish at times I was the summer I would have woken all sleeping in slumber I wish at times I was the winter I would have got all hatred to freeze I wish at times I was the light I would have given all darks a fight I wish at times I was a day I would have made friends with the night

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Black Matta

Date: 8/28/2015 6:21:00 PM

I wish if I were...> this topic is so wide and full of imaginations. I like your poem, but try to read it again and improve it. It would be wonderful.

Kamran Rashid
Date: 9/3/2015 5:39:00 PM

this is all an unending vovage of words , i always get confused , the words i am thinking and writting are all different it puzzles me at times and from quite a long time i am feeling like the thunder is fading away , pls help me through and thankyou for guding through and letting you time here again#love @burningsoulz--krb

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2015 11:24:00 PM

that is really something

Khrysstine Zhaira

Date: 6/3/2015 9:44:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem you have created. :)