I Wish

I wish at times I was a tree 
I would have been happy and more free 
I wish at times I was the rain 
I would have washed down all fear and pain 
I wish at times I was the breeze 
I would have been living in peace and  ease 
I wish at times I was the summer 
I would have woken all sleeping in slumber 
I wish at times I was the winter 
I would have got all hatred to freeze 
I wish at times I was the light
I would have given all darks a fight 
I wish at times I was a day 
I would have made friends with the night

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Date: 8/28/2015 6:21:00 PM
I wish if I were...> this topic is so wide and full of imaginations. I like your poem, but try to read it again and improve it. It would be wonderful.
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Kamran Rashid
Date: 9/3/2015 5:39:00 PM
this is all an unending vovage of words , i always get confused , the words i am thinking and writting are all different it puzzles me at times and from quite a long time i am feeling like the thunder is fading away , pls help me through and thankyou for guding through and letting you time here again#love @burningsoulz--krb
Date: 6/3/2015 11:24:00 PM
that is really something
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Date: 6/3/2015 9:44:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem you have created. :)
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