I Wish

Your my only one, my everything.
We know we all aren't perfect.
I feel like i can't live up to the way the other person was tward you.
I wish there was a way i can.
But nobody can be the same as the previous.
I wish my love was as effective as his.
I wish i could hold you everyday.
I wish i could be by your side everyday.
I wish i could make you feel secure n happy.
What I'm trynna say is:
I wish i could make you feel the way he made you feel.
But Eye Dee Kay how to do that... 
I do love and care about you, but is it love or infatuation?
I do love you a lot, but how much do you love me?
Your always saying "its okay if i wanna go with someone else."
Is that a sign that you really dnt know what you want?
It feels like I'm being pushd away slowly and i try to stay but dont see any effort to keep me coming back. 
Maybe we are to young.
Maybe I'm not that special someone.
Maybe I'm just not the bf material.
Maybe I'm just nothin.
Maybe I'm just not to be.
Eye Dee Kay anything anymore.
I do know i wanna wake up wit u by my side.
I pray for holy spirit to help us everyday.
To  stay on the right path.
To stay focus.
To keep us safe through tragic times.
Things r not as easy as i thought.
I wish it was as easy to do as easy as it is to say.
I wish life wasn't as hard as it is now.
But wishes never come true.
We kan only wait for jahs day to come inorder for that.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/27/2009 5:25:00 PM
wel well well Good job lil bro..... keep it up... n yes we all go through this stage but 1 day 1day something real will happen.... n it seems since im big sis i knw how u feel....
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:23:00 AM
Good piece of art is what you have displayed here my friend. Keep going. Ernilando
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Date: 5/24/2009 12:34:00 PM
I agree with amber, you deserve the best. she should see how much love is in your heart, the other guy can not of been that good if he is no longer around, God will see you through, if someone told me they wish I was like someone else id tell them to go get that person then, you are you and you are special in your way and your girl should treasure you and value you with all her heart. you are unique my friend theRe is only one you that counts for a lot, a great powerful write. God bless you
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Date: 5/24/2009 11:03:00 AM
wow bro this was very i mean very deep i gave u a 7 on this cuz when it cums down to love i think we all feel this way sumtimes but i hope thats ur ? are answered soon but bro i also wish u can be with the girl u love n that everything works out for the best will bro its ur sis smarty marty
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Date: 5/24/2009 10:25:00 AM
gahh when i read the title i automatically new who it was about...im sorry i dk what else to say...good job keep it up=]]TinkBabyy
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