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I Will Wait

I will wait till the sun falls down Till the moon goes away in a frown I will wait till my name is no longer a noun Till my dress is no longer a gown Till I no longer live in a town But I'm six feet under the ground I will wait I will wait for at least a whisper Till I escape the music at the bar When I don’t have to read a star Till I feel your voice not far And my thoughts it does mar Till I hear your call and say sir And i'm sure it's you father I will wait I will wait till it's clear you never forsake Clear as the lake For indeed I you did make And yes it was a piece of cake But your breath for me you did take And have loved me for my own sake So here I am wide awake Till my thoughts you overtake And I will wait for eternity, make no mistake This is me saying I love you (a retake)

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Date: 6/3/2014 11:06:00 AM
This is just my favourite piece from your 'pot' of the poetrysoup. Great job well done.
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