Red Fiery Poet I do not know?

I Will Pray

your beauty bleeds in the daylight
                            years of hard work, paid for your plight
                           you were the sweetest symphony
                             now a young heart's agony
                                youth and charm drifting away
                           callousness of time ruins your day
                              burdened with bricks you walk all the way
                            looking at you I have nothing to say
                             pretty Indian Woman, I will pray! I will pray




dedicated to the Indian lady working under a contruction site....

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Richard Lamoureux June 13, 2016 at 7:58 AM This is great, I'm glad I found it among your other gems. Hugs Rick.

Ayesha Karim March 20, 2016 at 10:57 AM I love this poem and it's great that you have a heart for Indian women. They really are beautiful!

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:06 AM Such a shame that too many Indian women aren't treated as well as they deserve!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2013 at 3:34 AM - Pleased to see your smiling face Red .... miss you! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres July 28, 2012 at 2:23 PM What a lovely dedication to this woman..your words are so lovely.

Matthew Anish July 25, 2012 at 2:09 PM I hope your prayers are anwered. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

David Williams July 18, 2012 at 10:45 AM Red, thanks for your kind comment, I hope you manage to write somentime soon...David xx

David Williams July 13, 2012 at 12:22 PM Red just stopping by to say hello, hope you have a peaceful weekend...David xx

Michael Smith June 6, 2012 at 7:00 AM Left me wanting more. This song of poetry was to short. Give us more. I missed your poems. I hadn't see ya around much. Glad to know you're still here.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2012 at 3:05 AM Super poem Red....a lovely dedicating. - Have a lovely Sunday to you, hope you are happy and well. - oxox Anne-Lise

Anne Rutherford June 2, 2012 at 4:25 PM Dear Red, makes one see your writing like a real picture .We never know what some have to do, just to live unless we see it. Excellent writing . hugs Anne

David Williams June 2, 2012 at 12:53 PM Red, you have painted a good picture of the plight of some people just to earn a living as such as it is. very well done...love David xx

Kathleen Stevens June 2, 2012 at 10:36 AM very nice!!