I Will Pray

your beauty bleeds in the daylight years of hard work, paid for your plight you were the sweetest symphony now a young heart's agony youth and charm drifting away callousness of time ruins your day burdened with bricks you walk all the way looking at you I have nothing to say pretty Indian Woman, I will pray! I will pray dedicated to the Indian lady working under a contruction site....

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2016 7:58:00 AM

This is great, I'm glad I found it among your other gems. Hugs Rick.

Ayesha Karim

Date: 3/20/2016 10:57:00 AM

I love this poem and it's great that you have a heart for Indian women. They really are beautiful!

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:06:00 AM

Such a shame that too many Indian women aren't treated as well as they deserve!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2013 3:34:00 AM

- Pleased to see your smiling face Red .... miss you! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 7/28/2012 2:23:00 PM

What a lovely dedication to this woman..your words are so lovely.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/25/2012 2:09:00 PM

I hope your prayers are anwered. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

David Williams

Date: 7/18/2012 10:45:00 AM

Red, thanks for your kind comment, I hope you manage to write somentime soon...David xx

David Williams

Date: 7/13/2012 12:22:00 PM

Red just stopping by to say hello, hope you have a peaceful weekend...David xx

Michael Smith

Date: 6/6/2012 7:00:00 AM

Left me wanting more. This song of poetry was to short. Give us more. I missed your poems. I hadn't see ya around much. Glad to know you're still here.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2012 3:05:00 AM

Super poem Red....a lovely dedicating. - Have a lovely Sunday to you, hope you are happy and well. - oxox Anne-Lise

Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/2/2012 4:25:00 PM

Dear Red, makes one see your writing like a real picture .We never know what some have to do, just to live unless we see it. Excellent writing . hugs Anne

David Williams

Date: 6/2/2012 12:53:00 PM

Red, you have painted a good picture of the plight of some people just to earn a living as such as it is. very well done...love David xx

Kathleen Stevens

Date: 6/2/2012 10:36:00 AM

very nice!!