I Will Never Write a Poem About a Red Red Rose

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I added another stanza to help the expressiveness and to lengthen the poem

I will never write a poem about a red red rose
If I ever, would you think it clever?
I will not ever say the petals are red as blood
If I ever, would you visit the rarest blood red rose,
The red red rose?

If you ever came near would you speak to 
The rose with extravagant words?
How absurd, such words i will never say your beauty
Compounds astounds this tenderness
Lovely audacious profoundly marvelous undisturbed

Fairest rose  seems to immaculately resonate every
Emotion I am infatuated completely taken by this
Rarity of roses the red red blood red rose so
Specular I have developed a new vernacular

I have fallen into the reservoir of endless rose 
Petals drowning in quintessential love
This pristine presence does not neglect it
Preserves it perfects, the red red rarest of roses

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