I added another stanza to help the expressiveness and to lengthen the poem
I will never write a poem about a red red rose If I ever, would you think it clever? I will not ever say the petals are red as blood If I ever, would you visit the rarest blood red rose, The red red rose? If you ever came near would you speak to The rose with extravagant words? How absurd, such words i will never say your beauty Compounds astounds this tenderness Lovely audacious profoundly marvelous undisturbed Fairest rose seems to immaculately resonate every Emotion I am infatuated completely taken by this Rarity of roses the red red blood red rose so Specular I have developed a new vernacular I have fallen into the reservoir of endless rose Petals drowning in quintessential love This pristine presence does not neglect it Preserves it perfects, the red red rarest of roses
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