I Will Leave You a Message

I will leave you a message-
Before I sail along this passage.
I shall write them on perfumed paper-
and proclaim my love from a sky scraper.
Before I venture to the west,
Your name will be written boldly on my vest,
Shaped like an arrow piercing the heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 8:34 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today as I am looking for the inspiration to write something special Muyideen. I am sure I can pick up on something here and there and then it will hit me out of left field. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Ayinla Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Thanks for reading my poem, I am glad you enjoyed it. Keep writing.
Ayinla Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Carol, I am glad u like it. keep writing.
Ayinla Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Thanks Carol, I am glad u liked it. Keep writing.
Ekpemandu Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 2:27 PM
very tasty words you used in this poem..i can almost eat them..nice piece dear
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