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I Will Leave You a Message

I will leave you a message- Before I sail along this passage. I shall write them on perfumed paper- and proclaim my love from a sky scraper. Before I venture to the west, Your name will be written boldly on my vest, Shaped like an arrow piercing the heart.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/3/2011 8:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today as I am looking for the inspiration to write something special Muyideen. I am sure I can pick up on something here and there and then it will hit me out of left field. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Muyideen Ayinla
Date: 11/3/2011 12:02:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poem, I am glad you enjoyed it. Keep writing.

Muyideen Ayinla
Date: 11/3/2011 11:54:00 AM

Thanks Carol, I am glad u like it. keep writing.

Muyideen Ayinla
Date: 11/3/2011 11:52:00 AM

Thanks Carol, I am glad u liked it. Keep writing.

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 11/2/2011 2:27:00 PM

very tasty words you used in this poem..i can almost eat them..nice piece dear