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I Will Be With You: Chiasmus

I will be with you, right here at your side; Be strong and courageous; with confidence, stride. Obey my commands; abundantly live. Meditate on the law by day, by night; Chew on my words, savoring each sweet bite. Follow my precepts, the joy that they give. Be strong and courageous, not weak of heart. The Lord will be with you; I’ll not depart.
---------- A chiasmus with an ABCDD'C'B'A' structure and an aabccbdd rhyme scheme. This is a distillation of Joshua 1:5-9

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Date: 3/16/2022 11:08:00 AM
Fine write Jeff, keeping well to the scripture too. Blessings,Gordon
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/16/2022 11:54:00 AM
Thanks, Gordon, they are definitely a wonderful inspiration
Date: 3/16/2022 7:27:00 AM
Nicely done, Jeff. This has hints of my Verso-Rhyme.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/16/2022 7:39:00 AM
So the verso-rhyme is outside-to-in rhyming? ABCDDCBA? And the chiasmus is outside-to-in symmetry of idea. I guess 'verso' is 'reverse order?' The two together make an interesting puzzle!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/16/2022 7:31:00 AM
Did not know about a Verso-Rhyme - will go check it out!

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