I Will

I will nourish laughter And kindness in this life I'll nod my head in silence But I'll speak when I am right I will greet a cloudy day With an optimistic glare I will see a gloomy sky But I'll know the sun is there . I will have ambition And I'll remember what I'm taught I will fight for what is mine And work for what is not I will work on silent projects And the visions that I see Others will take credit But I'll know that it was me I will be a shining star And a blessing to my friends You might laugh when I have failed But I will smile and try again By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/13/2020 9:23:00 AM

What a great and wise first poem. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/26/2019 9:05:00 AM

Enjoyed this affirmative, uplifting poem!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/16/2018 5:16:00 PM

Taking in your fist post Kyle, love this poem that flows so well, and the subject matter, right up my street, so applicable even today, Harry

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/25/2018 8:22:00 PM

I know I read this before but so worth rereading it. It's so well written and a great message... shine on my friend :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/3/2016 5:50:00 PM

I very much love this one... (^_^)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/20/2016 1:52:00 PM

Liked this Kyle, superbly penned indeed.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/13/2011 2:12:00 AM

Shining star!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/7/2011 11:24:00 AM

Have read them all and look forward to more, keep the pen going. Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2011 4:02:00 PM

No destroying from me Kyle,, game days are over here on the soup.. I just stayed with the name... Now i'm just a silly girl trying to find a new poetry form... lol.. anyways~ this is a willing poem to live by... smile and never give up.. i sure have not,,, take care,..p.d.

Mike Dailey

Date: 5/28/2011 1:36:00 PM

Nice

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2011 1:12:00 PM

Creative self introspective thoughts, Kyle