I Went To Heaven's Door

I went to heaven’s door and knocked
   and waited impatiently for reply but the door was blocked;
Peter came to open it but with the door set only slightly ajar
   he asked who I was and why I traveled so far.
I reminded him of my name
   and then told my story, tearing as I explained.
My only love came here, a little more than a year ago
   and hard as I try, my life forward just can’t go.

The door opened wide and bright
   in the distance I saw a blinding light
A hand touched my shoulder but still I did not see
   who it was that was touching me.
A majestic voice spoke in my ear
   and said my lonely life should be neither fear nor tears.
She loves you still and watches over you
   look at the time, it remains for the jobs you need do.

I felt  a brush of warmth around my shoulder
   and in the warming light I suddenly felt much bolder
as upon my cheek there was a loving kiss
   and once again, I felt the love I missed it still exists.
I turned away reluctantly, knowing I must live again
   and I must wait to return to heaven in the end.
Goodbye, I said for now I’ll live well, better than before
   Not Goodbye the voice replied, we’re with you evermore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 2, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Dm B, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Wonderful write DM!Congrats on superb win!!
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Greetings DM! Congrats for your WIN in the Heavenly contest! ;-)
Negron Flores Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations of the placement of the contest DM Babbit.
Scars Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Congrats on your win and thank you for being a part in my contest!-lu*smiles*
White Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 7:48 PM
I love this thank you
Posting Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Thank you for your reassuring poem.
Babbit Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 10:17 AM
I believe, thanks for reading. DMB
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Your words brought tears to my eyes DMB:-( hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 10:20 AM
I think it is inspirational DMB - good luck if it's for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Babbit Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Sorry to make you cry, but thanks for the reply. DMB
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