Michael Tor Poet Rhyme

I Went To Heaven

Laying in bed I was overtaken
by sleep.
  A surreal feeling I felt, putting
me calmly at ease.

   I saw and felt myself ascending
high.
   I stopped in midair, and I
couldn't believe what I saw 
through my eyes.

   It was a bright soft light, that
when seeing, brought love inside  
of me.
 I felt so much inner peace, it
was hard to believe.

   Was this an illusion or was this
magnificently real?
   I felt transformed, and needed
to kneel.

   I realized I was in front of my
Lord.
   And I listened closely as he spoke
these words.
   
 
  " I HAVE GIVEN YOU THE POWER
TO LOVE. THE POWER TO LOVE IS
A GREAT POWER. I HAVE EXPERIENCED
THE POWER TO LOVE, AND I LOVE
THE POWER TO LOVE. SO THAT IS WHY
I HAVE GIVEN YOU THE POWER TO
LOVE. SO GO OUT AND LOVE. YOU 
MUST GO BACK NOW."
  I said to him, " Lord I don't want to
go back."
  He said, " YOUR PURPOSE ON
EARTH IS NOT COMPLETED. THAT IS
WHY YOU ARE GOING BACK."




  Reluctantly I was going back, it felt
wonderful being with Jesus.
  I did what I was told just to please
him.
  I will never forget what happened
that night. Revealing to me  his
presence in light...


  


  
















   This really happened.
   While I was sleeping.

  Michael Tor    12/1/2015    Laura Urbaniak: I went to Heaven

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Wendy Rycroft February 22, 2016 at 5:12 PM A good poem xxxxx

CayCay Godwin December 3, 2015 at 10:43 PM Congratulations on your contest placement. Your poem wows me, excites me, comforts me, but does not surprise me. I had an elderly friend who died and came back on the operating table. Jesus' words to her, as I remember, were quite similar. I am so glad you shared this, Michael. You confirm my belief that there is much more than what we see ... CayCay

Susan Gentry December 3, 2015 at 12:34 AM Congratulations! Wonderful expressing of a great experience. Michael Tor December 3, 2015 at 1:27 AM Thank you Susan. Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your kind comments. It was a great experience I plan on writing the whole episode of what happened entirely.

Skat A December 2, 2015 at 11:56 PM Michael, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT** Michael Tor December 3, 2015 at 1:25 AM Thank you Skat for your kind comments. Blessings your way.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 2, 2015 at 11:10 PM Wonderful write Michael n so is the win!Big congrats ! Michael Tor December 3, 2015 at 1:25 AM Thank you Dr. Sharma I appreciate your kind thoughts.

Eve Roper December 2, 2015 at 10:33 PM Wow! Truely amazing poem a 7, Michael, congratulations on your win! Michael Tor December 3, 2015 at 1:21 AM Hi Eve thank you so much. It really happened to me. I have to write the story behind it it was incredible and true. I love the Lord and I know he is real. I was blessed to be chosen to experience everything that happened to me. I have to read your latest writes I am getting back to reading commenting and writing. God bless you Eve and thank you for your kind words.

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2015 at 6:41 PM wow, amazing story then!! Michael Tor December 3, 2015 at 1:17 AM Thanks Andrea I have to write the story behind it. Thanks for your visit. I was in such a state of shock when I woke up I didn't know if it was a dream or a revelation. The Lord told me two things that were going to happen in the future that really happened. Myself and my family were in disbelief when they happened it was real as real is.

Alexis Y. December 2, 2015 at 6:05 PM Michael, you took us all on a beautiful journey. And what we saw was an amazing sight and a profound experince. Great job. Congratulations on your winning it was well deserved :-) Alexis 7 Alexis Y. December 2, 2015 at 6:18 PM I can' t wait to see the follow up story. Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:09 PM Thank you Alexis it really happened. I will write a follow up story on it and explain it fully. God is real and he loves us all. Thanks for you visit.

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2015 at 5:42 PM hey, that would be something if it really happened that way. GREAT poem!! Congrats on the win. Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:03 PM Andrea it really did happen. I dont know if it was a revelation or if I was sleeping. I will write the whole story as it happened.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 2, 2015 at 12:44 PM Congratulations Michael. Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:06 PM Hi Laura thank you for the placement. This really did happen to me. I was either having a revelation or I was sleeping and God revealed this to me. I will write a follow up story about what happened. I really enjoyed your contest Laura. Thank you for putting it on. Blessings your way. Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:04 PM It really happened dont know if it was a revelation or I was sleeping I will write a story about it.

Beautiful Scars December 2, 2015 at 10:14 AM Congrats! I'm currently trying to change your placement. I haven't figured it out yet. You have placed in 2nd category. I apologize so much. I hope you're ok with this and I promise I'll figure it out. Congrats on your SECOND place win -lu *smiles* Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:14 PM Laura see comment above it skipped. Under Nayda comment.This really happened Laura I will write a story to explain what happened. True story..

Skat A December 2, 2015 at 9:05 AM Powerful and moving. Skat Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:15 PM Skat this really happened to me I will write a follow up story explaining what really happened entirely.

Richard Lamoureux December 2, 2015 at 7:28 AM Well expressed Michael, keep on loving! Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:08 PM Richard this really happened. Honestly I dont know if it was a revelation or if God spoke to me in a dream. I will write the full complete story. Thanks for your well appreciated comment my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2015 at 6:16 AM - Skillfully written, an experience many people say they have felt - Good luck in the contest, Michael - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:16 PM Anne- Lise this really happened.

Cherl Dunn December 1, 2015 at 6:40 PM Dear Micheal I can relate to this experience because I've died myself, and came back, I've also had the rare experience of being caught between body and rising, if you know what I mean, great work of truth the light is beautiful beyond words, and so peaceful I myself didn't want to leave it, but it was not my time, bravo on this work i give you a seven, cheri and thanks for your review of my work take care cheri Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:22 PM Cheri this really happened. I will write a story about what really happened. I am glad you enjoyed this write. I enjoyed your story. Thanks for visiting have to go visit your writes.

Theresa Cw December 1, 2015 at 4:11 PM I also agree with what Silent One has said. Great poem Michael Michael Tor December 2, 2015 at 6:12 PM Thank you Theresa it really happened. I will write a follow up story to say what happened.