I Went Down

where dreams go
 chi spiraling
 throughout my cells
 the only sound
 far away yaaaaaaaaaaaaaweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
 long and slow
 reminding my orange and green 
 juices to flow
 to keep me connected 
 to the earth below
 now i dream of plane crashes
 and new spaces
 and other things that
 i can’t recall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Hope you are having a restful lord's day! keep writing and reading poetry!
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:22 PM
A nice rhythmic write, kristi
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