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I went against the stream and lost

I went against the stream and self,
I saw me tired, laden, and lost.  
I carried the water uphill;
I went against the stream and self;
Alas, it flowed to the lower shelf!
Oh stream, i am so very cross! 
I went against the stream and self,
I saw me tired, laden, and lost.


8/18/14

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Date: 10/2/2014 9:22:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2014 10:03:00 AM
thank you, Sara, for your appreciation! it mean a lot :)) God bless
Date: 9/22/2014 12:21:00 PM
I have spent and wasted a lot of time going against the stream. Now I have learned to go with the flow. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 9/24/2014 10:44:00 PM
Yes, Brenda, when we go with the flow we also honor life and nature. :)) Thanks for the visit and congratulations!
Date: 8/18/2014 4:45:00 AM
wonderful triolet i have never attempted this form! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/18/2014 10:11:00 PM
thanks, Jan...hugs :))
Date: 8/18/2014 4:02:00 AM
Good poem
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