I Watched My Feet

I watched my feet
as I paced down
the street.

The concrete beneath me-
sharp and cutting,
like a glass-trimmed city,
filled with
agony and sin.

With every step
I bled more and more,
but on this road
I bled alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 28, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Hi, this is really good my friend. I love the lines.
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