I watch as time moves on

Great contrasts and love “until correction decays.” Blessings, dear one

every day i try too, to halt time, to feel alive, great words

Polluted streams are a condemnation of progress. You've written with great concern. I commend you.

Very pithy poem!

Hello Akham, your poem is hauntingly beautiful! I love the contrast between decay and purity, especially with the dirty stream and pure water, is powerful. Your words capture the relentless march of time and nature's resilience. Excellent! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Dear Akham N S, you are right its so sad seeing the contrast of life and all that around and i wish also to halt time until the ignorance and corruption and all the dark fades and light takes over but somethings just continue. You have a deep and kind eye and heart for all and that is evident through this write itself! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

- All over the world, rich and poor meet each other, and in some cases the encounter is so direct that only a fence or a street separates them - A powerful poem, Akham - hugs

Nature is full of contrasts. Great haiku.

Very well expressed, enjoyed reading.

Akham, your expressive haiku well describe the variety~~the contrasts~~ in nature. Janice

I enjoyed this series and the contrast at the end