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I Was Wrong

I was born with no one . 
 No parents to scare away fear or cast fun.
  Thinking ,the voice in my head was father. 
   The sky and clouds were my sisters and earth was my mother . 
    Took me too long .
     I finally found I was wrong . 
      I was an orphan with no dad or mom.
       Nor can I tell ,if it is a virtue or a damn.

19 aug 2021

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Al Juman Date: 8/28/2021 9:06:00 AM Realism live in everyone. Breathe my brother life will keep coming. be thankful for what you are allowed to achieve. and keep striving. adaption a mother it will be great, we find infinite mercy in the things we do. my wife was the mother of 90 year old lady who call on her instead of her children Login to Reply Mohamed Omar Date: 8/28/2021 12:11:00 PM You are right .Thanks a lot

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/22/2021 2:45:00 PM You are Mohammed, son of a great Father , and you are loved, by everyone and all :) Login to Reply Mohamed Omar Date: 8/23/2021 1:22:00 AM Thank you for your sweet feelings . Love you too

Deb M Date: 8/20/2021 1:08:00 AM Nice poem Mohamed but sad. Thanks for sharing. Debx Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/19/2021 7:23:00 PM Powerful, poignant, painful Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2021 3:43:00 PM that is so sad if it is the truth. But if you are inventing, I like it just as much . It's so poignant. (last word - damnation) Login to Reply Mohamed Omar Date: 8/20/2021 12:26:00 AM Unfortunately, it was my life. Thanks for the correction .Your opinion and critique is highly appreciated ,for you are an awesome poetess