I Was Thinking

How we become as one,
Thinking about how much we’ve 
strung.
After all I said is done,
Its seem’s you thought it wasn’t in 
the physical,
From I extended my hand to reach 
and touch you
Like smoke poof you were gone…
I took a glimpse , and a picture of 
you to see,
And reconcile with the feeling’s I get
When it seems you looking at me.
I heard your voice.
You show me the you care,
I pause for a minute to hear your 
voice again…
It’s strung at times when I think I've 
seen you,
And hear word’s, I thought you said.
I miss you right now, even 
tomorrow it will be worse…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 27, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Gabriel. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol
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April 25, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Hola, Nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy
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