I Was Saying:

...???

i blew the steam
whistle as a 
warning

but i couldn't
stop my train
of thought

from going 
off it's 
tracks
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Awtry Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 11:14 PM
very clever! :)
Connelly Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Awtry.
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