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I Was Out Riding Today

I was out riding this lovely day

And I saw myself

Riding on my beautiful horse

With my long hair flowing in the breeze...


The ability to judge

And the mistake was made

To ruin my life

I saw this day...


I saw a ghost

The ghost of me

Intriguing isn’t it I ask?

To be haunted by oneself

A reminder of the past....
 

I saw myself

With tears of sorrow

When others are not

Why do I cry I ask myself

And ignore the formality....


Of myself I say!

I saw a young girl

My past

It was me

I have been chasing myself

A warning I yell

I have paid the price

Of a past

And maybe a future

What does this signify?....


Do I have to draw you a map

Two minds of a single thought

That we are

I am on an eight hour tour

Passing by an orange mist

Of a graveyard of myself...


Through weeping of my lifeless eyes

I saw me standing there

In the distant land

Will you save me, I ask?....


In my mind the illusion is branded

Of the miserable souls of yesterday

Where all the cries can hear

Spinning web of lies

I just can’t stay together with me

But it’s too late....


I think for the never-ending

Never stopping

As I spin and spin

Just a blink before midnight

I found me again

As I was out riding this day...


Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/11/2014 6:46:00 AM
Dearest Brooke, as I read your lovely poem, a vivid image comes to mind of you on your horse, your face lost in reverie about your life. I love your poetry, Brooke. Love & Hugs;) Ben
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Ben... You are so kind so good to see you...

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