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I was here

barefoot I left my mark
temporary as it was in the sand
the sun my solemn witness



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Harp Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Line, very lovely poem here, and I love the last line especially. And I agree with Kim. Moon Harp
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 8:22 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment ~
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 1:13 PM
I know! Isn’t that something. Temporary, perhaps, but God knows where each footstep stood!
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 1:48 PM
thanks for your lovely visit and comment ~
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