I Was At a Park At Night

I was at a park at night
And I thought of you
As the sky grew darker and darker
And the air grew colder and colder
Because those are the only two adjectives
I could think of to describe your heart 
Which was weighing heavy on my mind
During my view of the park at night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anish Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 11:32 AM
You seem to have been "hurt" by someone and that comes through in this poem. Let me know what you think of my recent efforts
O'Neal Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Very nice write.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace