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I Was

I once was close to you, But I'm not any more. I was closer to you than Earth is to Mars. But now we are as The sun is to Pluto. Who's the blame, For things not being the same?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/23/2009 9:09:00 PM
love this again an again... didn't comment on the ones about ya man though... :) enjoy ya night!
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Date: 8/8/2009 10:34:00 AM
so many relationships with their troubles, some we could understand for we ourselves went through, but could never agree what one another feels in those time, good poem
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