Janice Canerdy Poet Monoku

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I Want You, Lol

Of visits I’m fond, like that buxom blond~~come up and see me some time!*



*In She Done Him Wrong (1933), Mae West as Lady Lou, a barroom singer, says to Captain Cummings (Cary Grant), “Why don’t you come up some time and see me?” 

August 25, 2020
entered in the Flirt with Me Contest     placed 1st
sponsored by Bobby May

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Gershon Wolf September 1, 2020 at 7:25 PM Belated congrats on your win in Bobby's contest with this great write, Janice! (Why don't you come on over and see me some time?! lol... That Mae West sure was 'larger than life!'). Wins and Wings, Gershon Janice Canerdy September 1, 2020 at 9:10 PM Thanks a million, Gershon! Janice

V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 4:29 AM Wonderful single line . Congratulations on your top win.:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa:-) Janice Canerdy August 27, 2020 at 6:26 AM Thanks so much, Deepa. Janice

Rama Balasubramanian August 27, 2020 at 3:27 AM Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama Janice Canerdy August 27, 2020 at 6:25 AM Thanks so much. Rama. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2020 at 2:48 AM - Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :) Janice Canerdy August 27, 2020 at 6:25 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 12:21 AM She is tenderly remembered, very nice, Janice, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William Janice Canerdy August 27, 2020 at 6:28 AM Thank you so much, William. Janice

Carol Mitra August 27, 2020 at 12:13 AM Lovely....Congrats on your win Janice :) Janice Canerdy August 27, 2020 at 6:28 AM Thanks so much, Carol. Janice

Eve Roper August 26, 2020 at 7:13 PM Awesome Monoku, Janice, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 7:48 PM Thanks so much, Eve. Janice

John Watt August 26, 2020 at 3:57 PM Oh, Mae I? Congrats on your win with this fun monoku, Janice! ~ John Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 7:49 PM Thanks so much, John. Janice

Line Gauthier August 26, 2020 at 3:50 PM Now that's a winner of a flirt line ~ bravo, Janice Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 3:55 PM Thanks so much, Line! Janice

Bobby May August 26, 2020 at 3:43 PM Congratulations on your placement Janice!! Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 3:56 PM Bobby, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice

Gershon Wolf August 26, 2020 at 12:18 PM Oh, Oh! Bingo, Janice! Great entry for Bobby's contest!! ~ gw (Soupmail, please). Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 2:23 PM Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice

Rico Leffanta August 26, 2020 at 11:47 AM I never found Mae the least bit attractive, but she certainly came up with some great one-liners! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 2:24 PM Thanks so much, Rico. Janice

Jan Allison August 26, 2020 at 10:45 AM what an invitation Janice lol:-) a fun poem:-) hugs jan xx Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 11:09 AM Thanks so much, Jan. Janice

Silent One August 26, 2020 at 5:17 AM I love that song, come up and see my sometimes... great one liner... Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 5:26 AM Thanks so much, S.O. Janice

Vijay Pandit August 26, 2020 at 4:45 AM Invitation to romance--well done flirt, Janice. Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 5:26 AM Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2020 at 12:48 AM - An open lovely welcome ... best wishes in the contest, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 5:41 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

Tom Cunningham August 26, 2020 at 12:19 AM An offer no man would refuse lol Good luck Janice. Tom Janice Canerdy August 26, 2020 at 5:27 AM Thanks so much, Tom. Janice