I Want You, Lol

summer cascades glisten in your eyes - let me swim your golden stream.

Poem created and posted on Poetry Soup ; 25 August 2020

Contest : Flirt With Me 

Sponsor : Bobby May
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Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:10 PM
So cute. Congrats
Kerr Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Many thanks for your visit and comment Howard
Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 4:06 AM
Wow.. brilliant line.:-) Congratulations on your top win Sir.:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards from Deepa:-)
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:47 AM
- Congratulations on your golden winning line, Howard :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:17 AM
'Tis a wondrous penning, Howard, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
Mitra Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:08 AM
Lovely monoku Howard....Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Great Monoku, Howard, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Kerr Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 11:06 PM
I really appreciate that, Eve. Howard
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:54 PM
So poetic! Congrats on your win! ~ John
Kerr Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Thanks for that, John. Much appreciated. Howard
May Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations on your placement Howard! well done my friend
Kerr Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Bobby, I enjoyed the contest. Thanks for reading my submission and of course the placement. Howard
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:03 PM
how flirtatious, lovely imagery Howard:-) hugs jan xx
Kerr Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Thank you Jan. Your comments matter to me. Howard
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