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I Want You, Lol

kissing my bare feet ~ like a receding wave you tease me



Flirt with me Contest ~
Sponsored by Bobby May
         Placed 1st

© 25th August 2020

feelingsmonoku

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Akkina Downing

November 3, 2020 at 4:19 PM

Oh how charming :)

Paul Callus

November 4, 2020 at 1:02 AM

Thank you, Akkina! What a pleasure to see you back @ Soup after such a long time. Best regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

October 19, 2020 at 12:21 PM

Oolalala..Sizzling from the grill.Love this.

Paul Callus

October 20, 2020 at 11:09 AM

Thank you, Charm. Pleased to see that you're posting again. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

October 1, 2020 at 7:52 AM

so clever - very pleased (but not surprised) to see it was a winner

Paul Callus

October 12, 2020 at 5:07 AM

Thank you, Jack; your support is appreciated. Regards // paul

Michael Tor

September 16, 2020 at 2:58 PM

Sensuality at its best Paul. Congratulations on your win my friend...

Paul Callus

September 17, 2020 at 12:52 PM

Thank you, Michael. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios

September 7, 2020 at 8:00 PM

How wonderfully creative, Paul Panagiota xx

Paul Callus

September 8, 2020 at 11:58 AM

So pleased that you enjoyed it Pangie...thank you! Regards // paul

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

August 28, 2020 at 10:12 PM

Oh ok you do more one liners. Cool, this is saucy and sensational!! Kudos!

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 2:57 AM

Thank you for the encouragement, Zaynab:) Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

August 28, 2020 at 1:18 PM

You surely have a knack for the monoku, Paul. I LOVE this one. To my faves. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:41 AM

I appreciate your lovely comments and the fav, dear Carolyn...thank you! Take care. Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

August 27, 2020 at 8:49 AM

A little naughty and sensuous and so cute! And you won , congratulations my dear friend. Hugs and warm regards, Jenny.

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:36 AM

I agree with your comments, Jenny, and as usual I try not to cross the line! Pleased you enjoyed, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 5:54 AM

Feet highly sensitive region.. Lovely romantic write dear Paul sir:-) Congratulations on your top win. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards sent to you:-)

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:30 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments & congrats, my friend. Take care. Warm regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 2:56 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:16 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise:) Have a lovely day! Hugs // paul

William Kelii Kekaula

August 27, 2020 at 12:53 AM

Love the connecting lines, Paul, very impressive and my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:20 AM

Thank you on all counts, my friend. May you and yours keep well! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

August 26, 2020 at 7:22 PM

Awesome romantic Monoku, Paul, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:08 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. Have a lovely blessed Sunday. Hugs // paul

John Watt

August 26, 2020 at 4:19 PM

Congrats on your win, Paul ~ John

Paul Callus

August 29, 2020 at 11:59 PM

Thank you, John. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

August 26, 2020 at 3:53 PM

charming ~ congrats on your top win, Paul.

Paul Callus

August 29, 2020 at 11:59 PM

Thank you, Line. Have a lovely day! // paul

Bobby May

August 26, 2020 at 3:51 PM

Congratulations on your placement Paul, excellent my friend!

Paul Callus

August 29, 2020 at 11:56 PM

Thank you, Bobby, for the top placement (and inspiration). Regards // paul

Silent One

August 26, 2020 at 9:44 AM

Great descriptive one liner...

Paul Callus

August 29, 2020 at 11:54 PM

Thank you, S-1. Best regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

August 25, 2020 at 3:43 PM

Good one Paul, as the saying goes, dont knock it till you've tried it lol Tom

Paul Callus

August 29, 2020 at 11:51 PM

Thank you, Tom:) Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 25, 2020 at 12:02 PM

Hello Paul Callus, the water feels good for the feet. Walking in the water is calming. Regards Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 26, 2020 at 6:30 AM

Helo Paul, yes the water is relaxing. Regards Darlene

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 3:08 PM

I agree with you, Darlene! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

August 25, 2020 at 10:42 AM

Teasingly lovely!

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 3:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. All the best // paul

Kim Rodrigues

August 25, 2020 at 9:18 AM

Love this, Paul! Imagery in my mind...

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 2:57 PM

Thank you, Kim ~ don't let imagination run away with you:) Regards // paul

Judy Ball

August 25, 2020 at 8:54 AM

Nice one Paul. Good stuff. Saying so much with so little. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 2:47 PM

Thank you, Judy. Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands

August 25, 2020 at 8:34 AM

Great one Paul! Well done :)

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 2:42 PM

Pleased you found it to your liking, Heidi...thank you! Regards:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 25, 2020 at 8:15 AM

... woooW ... I giggle ... :) - Well done, Paul :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 1:58 PM

I've seen you smile many times, Anne-Lise; sweet to see you giggling, as well:) Thank you for stopping by my friend. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

August 25, 2020 at 8:00 AM

ooh err Paul a sensual piece... reminds me of Sarah Ferguson who was married to Prince Andrew lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

August 25, 2020 at 1:28 PM

Thank you...smiling....but this one will not make the headlines, Jan (just looked_no paparazzi waiting outside!:) Hugs // paul

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