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kissing my bare feet ~ like a receding wave you tease me Flirt with me Contest ~ Sponsored by Bobby May Placed 1st © 25th August 2020

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Akkina Downing

Date: 11/3/2020 4:19:00 PM

Oh how charming :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2020 1:02:00 AM

Thank you, Akkina! What a pleasure to see you back @ Soup after such a long time. Best regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/19/2020 12:21:00 PM

Oolalala..Sizzling from the grill.Love this.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/20/2020 11:09:00 AM

Thank you, Charm. Pleased to see that you're posting again. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 10/1/2020 7:52:00 AM

so clever - very pleased (but not surprised) to see it was a winner

Paul Callus
Date: 10/12/2020 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Jack; your support is appreciated. Regards // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 9/16/2020 2:58:00 PM

Sensuality at its best Paul. Congratulations on your win my friend...

Paul Callus
Date: 9/17/2020 12:52:00 PM

Thank you, Michael. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/7/2020 8:00:00 PM

How wonderfully creative, Paul Panagiota xx

Paul Callus
Date: 9/8/2020 11:58:00 AM

So pleased that you enjoyed it Pangie...thank you! Regards // paul

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/28/2020 10:12:00 PM

Oh ok you do more one liners. Cool, this is saucy and sensational!! Kudos!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 2:57:00 AM

Thank you for the encouragement, Zaynab:) Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2020 1:18:00 PM

You surely have a knack for the monoku, Paul. I LOVE this one. To my faves. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 12:41:00 AM

I appreciate your lovely comments and the fav, dear Carolyn...thank you! Take care. Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/27/2020 8:49:00 AM

A little naughty and sensuous and so cute! And you won , congratulations my dear friend. Hugs and warm regards, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 12:36:00 AM

I agree with your comments, Jenny, and as usual I try not to cross the line! Pleased you enjoyed, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 5:54:00 AM

Feet highly sensitive region.. Lovely romantic write dear Paul sir:-) Congratulations on your top win. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards sent to you:-)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 12:30:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments & congrats, my friend. Take care. Warm regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:56:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 12:16:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise:) Have a lovely day! Hugs // paul

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 12:53:00 AM

Love the connecting lines, Paul, very impressive and my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 12:20:00 AM

Thank you on all counts, my friend. May you and yours keep well! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:22:00 PM

Awesome romantic Monoku, Paul, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 12:08:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. Have a lovely blessed Sunday. Hugs // paul

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 4:19:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Paul ~ John

Paul Callus
Date: 8/29/2020 11:59:00 PM

Thank you, John. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2020 3:53:00 PM

charming ~ congrats on your top win, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/29/2020 11:59:00 PM

Thank you, Line. Have a lovely day! // paul

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Paul, excellent my friend!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/29/2020 11:56:00 PM

Thank you, Bobby, for the top placement (and inspiration). Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 8/26/2020 9:44:00 AM

Great descriptive one liner...

Paul Callus
Date: 8/29/2020 11:54:00 PM

Thank you, S-1. Best regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/25/2020 3:43:00 PM

Good one Paul, as the saying goes, dont knock it till you've tried it lol Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 8/29/2020 11:51:00 PM

Thank you, Tom:) Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2020 12:02:00 PM

Hello Paul Callus, the water feels good for the feet. Walking in the water is calming. Regards Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2020 6:30:00 AM

Helo Paul, yes the water is relaxing. Regards Darlene

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 3:08:00 PM

I agree with you, Darlene! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2020 10:42:00 AM

Teasingly lovely!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 3:00:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. All the best // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2020 9:18:00 AM

Love this, Paul! Imagery in my mind...

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 2:57:00 PM

Thank you, Kim ~ don't let imagination run away with you:) Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 8/25/2020 8:54:00 AM

Nice one Paul. Good stuff. Saying so much with so little. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/25/2020 8:34:00 AM

Great one Paul! Well done :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 2:42:00 PM

Pleased you found it to your liking, Heidi...thank you! Regards:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 8:15:00 AM

... woooW ... I giggle ... :) - Well done, Paul :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 1:58:00 PM

I've seen you smile many times, Anne-Lise; sweet to see you giggling, as well:) Thank you for stopping by my friend. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2020 8:00:00 AM

ooh err Paul a sensual piece... reminds me of Sarah Ferguson who was married to Prince Andrew lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2020 1:28:00 PM

Thank you...smiling....but this one will not make the headlines, Jan (just looked_no paparazzi waiting outside!:) Hugs // paul