William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monoku

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I Want You Lol

*Image of Rita Hayworth by Gifer.

I want you lol

trade stands I~~feel prompts her pardon I said my treat for I am forthright

2020 August 24
*1st Place*
Flirt With Me
~~Bobby May: Judged 2020 August 26

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Janice Canerdy August 27, 2020 at 6:33 AM CONGRATS on your win, William! Janice William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 9:21 AM Thanks, Janice, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 3:20 AM Awesome line dear William sir:-) Congratulations on your top well deserved win. Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care. Have a beautiful day.Warm regards~Deepa:-) William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 3:23 AM Again, thank you my friend, Deepa, you honor me, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2020 at 2:43 AM - Congratulations on your winning line, William :) - // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 3:02 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise, for your attributes, Aloha! William

Howard Kerr August 27, 2020 at 1:55 AM Excellent work, William. Challenging and creative effort. Congratulations on your award. Howard William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 1:59 AM My thanks, Howard, for your considerations being expressed, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna August 27, 2020 at 1:33 AM Congrats William! A well deserved top win for this excellent monoku! Aloha to you!!! William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 1:36 AM Appreciate your assessments, Krish, namaste! William

Carol Mitra August 26, 2020 at 11:59 PM Nice piece William....Congrats on your win. William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 12:03 AM 'Tis gracious of you, Carol, enjoy the moments, Aloha! William

Rama Balasubramanian August 26, 2020 at 10:56 PM Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 11:13 PM Many thanks to you, Rama, fulfilling my day, Aloha! William

Jan Allison August 26, 2020 at 8:10 PM excellent ink William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 8:17 PM A welcoming heart, Jan, to brighten one's day, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Eve Roper August 26, 2020 at 6:59 PM Awesome Monoku, William, congratulations on your 1st place win, very well deserved. Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 7:11 PM Such a righteous soul, sweet Eve, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman August 26, 2020 at 5:10 PM The PS gremlin is at it again! I know I commented on your monoku! A red headed winner in both ways! Congrats William! William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 5:34 PM Thanks, Sam, trolls on site, stay well my friend and Aloha! William

John Watt August 26, 2020 at 3:49 PM Way to go William! Congrats ~ John William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 3:54 PM Thanks, John, stay well and Aloha! William

Line Gauthier August 26, 2020 at 3:39 PM Congrats on top win, William. William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 3:45 PM A provocative tease--so was Rita, Line, thanks for the accolade, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Bobby May August 26, 2020 at 3:28 PM Congratulations on your placement William! William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 3:39 PM I am grateful for the opportunity, Bobby, somewhat difficult write, albeit, so much there is in life, and thanks for the 1st Place win, stay well and Aloha! William

Sigrid Ermine August 24, 2020 at 11:00 PM Sorry, William. I know this is bad. I'm in love with the delightful girl.... Was there something attached??! ... She is hands down handsomest!! William Kelii Kekaula August 24, 2020 at 11:41 PM I originally put my name in err, DARN! Rules on monoku and PS contest--differs, but latter stands true, ergo, REVISION, darn!, thanks, still, for dropping by, Sigrid, Aloha! William