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*Image of Rita Hayworth by Gifer. I want you lol trade stands I~~feel prompts her pardon I said my treat for I am forthright 2020 August 24 *1st Place* Flirt With Me ~~Bobby May: Judged 2020 August 26

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/27/2020 6:33:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win, William! Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 9:21:00 AM

Thanks, Janice, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 3:20:00 AM

Awesome line dear William sir:-) Congratulations on your top well deserved win. Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care. Have a beautiful day.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 3:23:00 AM

Again, thank you my friend, Deepa, you honor me, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:43:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 3:02:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, for your attributes, Aloha! William

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/27/2020 1:55:00 AM

Excellent work, William. Challenging and creative effort. Congratulations on your award. Howard

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 1:59:00 AM

My thanks, Howard, for your considerations being expressed, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/27/2020 1:33:00 AM

Congrats William! A well deserved top win for this excellent monoku! Aloha to you!!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 1:36:00 AM

Appreciate your assessments, Krish, namaste! William

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/26/2020 11:59:00 PM

Nice piece William....Congrats on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 12:03:00 AM

'Tis gracious of you, Carol, enjoy the moments, Aloha! William

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/26/2020 10:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 11:13:00 PM

Many thanks to you, Rama, fulfilling my day, Aloha! William

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2020 8:10:00 PM

excellent ink William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 8:17:00 PM

A welcoming heart, Jan, to brighten one's day, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 6:59:00 PM

Awesome Monoku, William, congratulations on your 1st place win, very well deserved. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 7:11:00 PM

Such a righteous soul, sweet Eve, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/26/2020 5:10:00 PM

The PS gremlin is at it again! I know I commented on your monoku! A red headed winner in both ways! Congrats William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 5:34:00 PM

Thanks, Sam, trolls on site, stay well my friend and Aloha! William

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 3:49:00 PM

Way to go William! Congrats ~ John

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 3:54:00 PM

Thanks, John, stay well and Aloha! William

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2020 3:39:00 PM

Congrats on top win, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 3:45:00 PM

A provocative tease--so was Rita, Line, thanks for the accolade, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 3:39:00 PM

I am grateful for the opportunity, Bobby, somewhat difficult write, albeit, so much there is in life, and thanks for the 1st Place win, stay well and Aloha! William

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/24/2020 11:00:00 PM

Sorry, William. I know this is bad. I'm in love with the delightful girl.... Was there something attached??! ... She is hands down handsomest!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2020 11:41:00 PM

I originally put my name in err, DARN! Rules on monoku and PS contest--differs, but latter stands true, ergo, REVISION, darn!, thanks, still, for dropping by, Sigrid, Aloha! William