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I Want You Lol

*Image of Rita Hayworth by Gifer.

I want you lol

trade stands I~~feel prompts her pardon I said my treat for I am forthright

2020 August 24
*1st Place*
Flirt With Me
~~Bobby May: Judged 2020 August 26

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Janice Canerdy Date: 8/27/2020 6:33:00 AM CONGRATS on your win, William! Janice Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/27/2020 9:21:00 AM Thanks, Janice, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

V. Deepa Date: 8/27/2020 3:20:00 AM Awesome line dear William sir:-) Congratulations on your top well deserved win. Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care. Have a beautiful day.Warm regards~Deepa:-) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/27/2020 3:23:00 AM Again, thank you my friend, Deepa, you honor me, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/27/2020 2:43:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning line, William :) - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/27/2020 3:02:00 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise, for your attributes, Aloha! William

Howard Kerr Date: 8/27/2020 1:55:00 AM Excellent work, William. Challenging and creative effort. Congratulations on your award. Howard Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/27/2020 1:59:00 AM My thanks, Howard, for your considerations being expressed, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/27/2020 1:33:00 AM Congrats William! A well deserved top win for this excellent monoku! Aloha to you!!! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/27/2020 1:36:00 AM Appreciate your assessments, Krish, namaste! William

Carol Mitra Date: 8/26/2020 11:59:00 PM Nice piece William....Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/27/2020 12:03:00 AM 'Tis gracious of you, Carol, enjoy the moments, Aloha! William

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 8/26/2020 10:56:00 PM Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 11:13:00 PM Many thanks to you, Rama, fulfilling my day, Aloha! William

Jan Allison Date: 8/26/2020 8:10:00 PM excellent ink William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 8:17:00 PM A welcoming heart, Jan, to brighten one's day, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Eve Roper Date: 8/26/2020 6:59:00 PM Awesome Monoku, William, congratulations on your 1st place win, very well deserved. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 7:11:00 PM Such a righteous soul, sweet Eve, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/26/2020 5:10:00 PM The PS gremlin is at it again! I know I commented on your monoku! A red headed winner in both ways! Congrats William! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 5:34:00 PM Thanks, Sam, trolls on site, stay well my friend and Aloha! William

John Watt Date: 8/26/2020 3:49:00 PM Way to go William! Congrats ~ John Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 3:54:00 PM Thanks, John, stay well and Aloha! William

Line Gauthier Date: 8/26/2020 3:39:00 PM Congrats on top win, William. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 3:45:00 PM A provocative tease--so was Rita, Line, thanks for the accolade, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Bobby May Date: 8/26/2020 3:28:00 PM Congratulations on your placement William! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/26/2020 3:39:00 PM I am grateful for the opportunity, Bobby, somewhat difficult write, albeit, so much there is in life, and thanks for the 1st Place win, stay well and Aloha! William

Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/24/2020 11:00:00 PM Sorry, William. I know this is bad. I'm in love with the delightful girl.... Was there something attached??! ... She is hands down handsomest!! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/24/2020 11:41:00 PM I originally put my name in err, DARN! Rules on monoku and PS contest--differs, but latter stands true, ergo, REVISION, darn!, thanks, still, for dropping by, Sigrid, Aloha! William