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I Want You

blow a kiss like buttered popcorn - the movies entry sway of love Monoku composed August 24, 2020 Contest Submission: I Want You

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2021 3:56:00 AM

Congrats on this winner. I can remember the days of going to the movies. I wonder if they will ever thrive again. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/14/2021 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I am with you in that movie attendance wish. Cheers Brian

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/25/2020 4:04:00 PM

Hi Brian, Good one liner! Congratulations on your win in the contest:-) Alexis

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/25/2020 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. Kind of you to read my one liner. Take care. Sincerely Brian

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 6:22:00 AM

Wow..lovely love line..:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win Brian sir. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/27/2020 12:05:00 PM

Greetings V Deepa, thank you for your positive response. Persistence does pay. Surprised by the placement. I write because of kind folks such as yourself. Be well. Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 3:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning line, Brian :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/27/2020 12:07:00 PM

My appreciation for your comments. You are most thoughtful Anne-Lise. Regards always. Brian

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 1:23:00 AM

An interesting take, Brian, my compliments on your win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/27/2020 12:10:00 PM

Hello William You are correct - I did try for a slightly different angle to the contest. Buttered popcorn smooches are sometimes exchanged in a darkened movie theatre. Tried to suggest that but went with an airborne kiss in covid-19 times. Thank you for responding. Brian

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:32:00 PM

Great Monoku, Brian, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/26/2020 9:08:00 PM

Hello Eve. You are very kind. I am a complete novice in Monoku but so enjoyed tinkering with this interesting structure. Sincere good wishes, Brian

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Brian

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/26/2020 9:04:00 PM

Hi Bobby Thank you for running the contest. I was unfamiliar with the Monoku form till you highlighted it. Best wishes, Brian