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I Want You

blow a kiss like buttered popcorn - the movies entry sway of love












Monoku composed August 24, 2020
Contest Submission: I Want You

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Sara Kendrick

December 14, 2021 at 3:56 AM

Congrats on this winner. I can remember the days of going to the movies. I wonder if they will ever thrive again. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara

Brian Sambourne

December 14, 2021 at 6:29 AM

Thank you Sara. I am with you in that movie attendance wish. Cheers Brian

Alexis Y.

November 25, 2020 at 4:04 PM

Hi Brian, Good one liner! Congratulations on your win in the contest:-) Alexis

Brian Sambourne

November 25, 2020 at 4:09 PM

Thank you Alexis. Kind of you to read my one liner. Take care. Sincerely Brian

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 6:22 AM

Wow..lovely love line..:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win Brian sir. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Brian Sambourne

August 27, 2020 at 12:05 PM

Greetings V Deepa, thank you for your positive response. Persistence does pay. Surprised by the placement. I write because of kind folks such as yourself. Be well. Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 3:02 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning line, Brian :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Sambourne

August 27, 2020 at 12:07 PM

My appreciation for your comments. You are most thoughtful Anne-Lise. Regards always. Brian

William Kelii Kekaula

August 27, 2020 at 1:23 AM

An interesting take, Brian, my compliments on your win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Brian Sambourne

August 27, 2020 at 12:10 PM

Hello William You are correct - I did try for a slightly different angle to the contest. Buttered popcorn smooches are sometimes exchanged in a darkened movie theatre. Tried to suggest that but went with an airborne kiss in covid-19 times. Thank you for responding. Brian