I Want You

You can put lipstick on my lips if you let me put hands on your hips!




‘Flirt with me’ poetry contest
2nd placement.
Sponsor Bobby May 
Written 24/08/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Ha ha...clever line dear Krish sir.:-D:-P Congratulations on your win.. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards sent to you:-)
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Thanks Deepa! Congrats on your win too!! You won with a thud!!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:59 AM
- Congratulations on your fun winning line, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Anne! Glad you like!!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:26 AM
Back again with my compliments on your win, stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Thanks William! Congrats on your top win too with your brilliant write!
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Great Monoku,Krish , congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:36 AM
Thanks Eve! Pleased you like it. Hugs too! Krish
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:33 PM
The rare rhyming one-liner! Nice, Krish. Congrats on your win ~ John
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Thanks John! Why not rhyme if there is time? Happy to be amongst winners that includes you!
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Very funny, Krish ~ delightful. Congrats on your top win with this cutie.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Thanks Line! Thanks for your kind words! My regards!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Lol, 'tis humorist, most enjoyable, hoping the best my friend, Aloha! William
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 10:51 PM
Thanks William! My kind regards!:)
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:20 PM
A wonderful Monoku, Krish. It is so ripe that humour oozes!!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 10:52 PM
Thanks Newton! Wonderful to have you visit my page. Regards:)
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