I Want To Save You

I will take this challenge on.
I want to save you,
I want you to make it through alive.
I know the person you are,
I know what you think of,
I know what you want to do.
I am here for you, and you know that.
I always have been here for you,
And i always will be here for you.
God is there for you.
You cant say that you are alone, 
Because your not,
you have me, and you have God.
I know you may not have your parents, 
But you have us.
We are your army,
We will protect you from evil.
We will save you from yourself.
We will keep you alive.
I will take this challenge on.
I want to save you,
I want you to make it through alive.
I know the person you are,
I know what you think of,
I know what you want to do.
I know all you want to do is die.
I know you just want to end it all.
But i could not live without you.
I need you just as much as you need me.
I will fall apart if you are not here with me.
We both are having the same problems.
We have to get through this together.
I dont want to hear the words "Good-bye" come out of your mouth.
I dont want to find you dead on the floor surrounded by blood. 
You know that will tear me apart.
And i know if you ever saw me like that it would tear you apart too. 
Lets make a promise that neither of us will ever see one of each other like that.
Not unless the impossible happened.
I want to help you.
I dont want you to leave the world in this way.
I want you to live life to its fullest.
I Love You, and i want to see you live.
I will take this challenge on.
I want to save you,
I want you to make it through alive.
I know the person you are,
I know what you think of,
I know what you want to do.
I am here for you, and so is God.
Never forget that.
Remember that you are not alone.
Your not alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/16/2011 11:26:00 AM
Thank you guys for all the nice comments ^.^ Yes that is true i think everyone has that one person they want to help save. ^.^
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:44:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Sierra. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:10:00 AM
Awww Hun that a lovely poem I loved it and this one is goiong up on my wall :) Keep wrting darling Love Andrea
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:34:00 AM
great piece i think everyone has a person they want to save *luv skat
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:50:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* Thank You! Can I count on that? *^_#* Love, Jasper
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