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I Want To Have the Victory of Life Game

I was born in a small town					
                                      seen many ups and down					
                                 At the middle of the road of my life					
                                pain from the heart's grave I realize
                               now, I don't find my sweet College life 					
					
                                   What I had left behind the way					
                            now muffled voices of my  memory casts					
                       But Soul says to throw all bad things of the past					
                               drive the life vehicle smoothly ahead
                                    to reach another golden gate
                                   					
					
                                    Destination is waiting eagerly					
                              time is passing fastly waits for none					
                            I want to have the victory of life game					
                                 being a robust by maintaing trust
                          without forgetting my memories of the past					



Sponsored by: nette onclaud
Written by: bldevnath

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2012 8:18:00 AM

hi bl.. thanks for entering.. kindly put your best age in the poem and check the spelling of " ahed" ( ahead).. thanks!...:) hugggs!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 9:32:00 AM

Thanks......bl"

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 9:28:00 AM

Sorry, my friend, silly mistakes I do many times. Many many thanks for showing me the path. Loved it, my sweet friend. I have done after your touch. Thanks......b"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2012 6:52:00 AM

bl ! Thank you for sharing it,it is not always life bring what we want most.oxox love Anne-Lise

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 7:09:00 AM

Hi! my sweet friend. Thanks for your lovely comment on my write. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2012 4:52:00 PM

a very positive energetic poem, BL. YOu should put your best age on it and enter it in the Age contest! by the way, just say fast(not fastly) I really liked this one from you!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 7:08:00 AM

I try to feel anything with my own instinct given by my believed God. God is with in you, I am inspired. Loved it, my sweet friend. I have entered in the contest. Thanks.......bl

Jack Horne

Date: 1/10/2012 12:19:00 PM

Deep write, my friend - I hope you succeed in all you do

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 7:02:00 AM

Thanks, no word I want to speak here,my sweet friend, JACK HORNE......bl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2012 7:54:00 AM

ANd that you shall my poet friend... fine poetry written here... always Michael

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/10/2012 8:08:00 AM

Many thanks to you for reading my write and for early comment. Loved it very much. bl