I Want To Give Up!!!

I want to give up,
I know i can't,
I'm doing all i can,
To make everyone proud,

I want to give up,
I know it's not right,
I've got to rethink,
And think of myself,

I want to give up,
There's too many people,
Who know i can do it,
Who believe in me,

I want to give up,
It seems so wrong,
I believe i can do it,
I must carry on!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 7:22 PM
Rhianon~ I like your uplifting end to a struggle from within yourself ,great expression with words! Never give up! Keep writing! Laura :)
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