I Want To Break Free

Don't want to be tied no more to the shackles of my own thoughts. My body is like a cage and I want to break free.

I have no regrets and though a few dreams haven't been fulfilled but no more crying over that what wasn't meant to be.

I want so much to escape from the worldly pleasures and from the daily madness of the things around , I want to fly high in the sky and wish so much to be me.

I want to be the wind, the rain and the fire that's burning inside me, I want to be the bird that's watching everything silently perched high up on a tree.

I no more wish to visit the places where the world thinks God resides since there's no point talking to someone who is not like me...I have cried endlessly to Him and He still seems not to see!

How I wish I could just Break Free.

Varsha Tomar
Contest name : 5th poem, you have post on the soup
Sponsor name: SKAT - OZ
30th june 2013

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Date: 7/7/2013 10:10:00 AM
VARSHA -CONGRATULATIONS!!! with your 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda
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Date: 7/8/2013 2:53:00 AM
Thank you Linda..your comments are a great motivation! Read about your mother's demise, hope she finds peace! Stay blessed!
Date: 7/5/2013 2:39:00 PM
Varsha congrats on your fine win. A nicely expressed Poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/5/2013 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem!Love it!!
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Date: 7/4/2013 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win... I am reminded of a similar plea I made some time ago.. You might like "Pilgrim's Plea" found in my portfolio..... Jake
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:30:00 PM
VARSHA, Congratulations, <3:-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:09:00 AM
Thank You SKAT!
Date: 6/28/2013 8:54:00 PM
Yeah that itch of freedom.Break free my friend you have a companion here :-) I see sadness written all over it, don't lose hope in prayers he listens.Hope he heals what gives you so much pain
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Date: 6/29/2013 12:33:00 AM
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