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I Want To Always Look Up

blue skies smile at me
white fluffy clouds lift me up
lay me down in sun 

Written October 2, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

October 4, 2022 at 9:13 AM

I can see the sky, and I feel the love.

L Milton Hankins

October 4, 2022 at 11:14 AM

Thanks, Caren. There is just something about the warmth of the sun that delights me.

Gershon Wolf

October 3, 2022 at 6:26 PM

Love the sentiment, Milt. Sounds like things are looking up! Smiles, Gershon

L Milton Hankins

October 3, 2022 at 7:04 PM

Thanks, gw. I think I REALLY want to be laid down facing the sun, and that was in my mind.

Michael Tor

October 3, 2022 at 1:33 PM

My mother wrote us boys a letter and put it in a hidden place that we would find after she was in God's arms. In that letter she said remember me on a beautiful day when you look up and see the clouds it is me looking down on you. This reminded me of her words in that letter to us boys. A favorite Milton thanks for sharing...

L Milton Hankins

October 3, 2022 at 3:09 PM

Aw, I'm so glad it had a special meaning for you.