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I Wanna Talk About U

Unbidden you deserted our happy home.

Unforgivable the things you left unsaid.

Understandably our children were undone.

Unapologetically I refuse you entry. 

Under no circumstances upstart.

Unbroken now my broken heart.

Unwieldy unyielding you will find.

Unlikely I will change my mind.

Unless you fall down on your knees.

Unendingly  begging of me "Please".

Copyright © Jean Murray | Year Posted 2017

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/25/2019 2:58:00 AM I can relate Jean. Some things are unforgivable. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this outstanding piece! xxoo Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/25/2019 3:03:00 AM Good morning Connie and thank you. I had to add two extra lines to qualify but I see a crack in my armour appear because of that stipulation. Time is a wonderful healer.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/1/2017 2:14:00 PM Hello Jean, my goodness you have been through a lot. i do hope things are better for you now. I sense your anger in this poem. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 10/1/2017 2:19:00 PM Hello Darlene. My X and I have not spoken in 5 years. That's the way I intend to keep it. Thankfully, our children respect my wishes. Somehow it works fine that he comes to the door but no further. I still hate him for his maltreatment of me and I always will.

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/10/2017 7:05:00 AM Well articulated poem--best wishes for the U contest, Jean! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/10/2017 7:25:00 AM Again thank you Vijay. Ditto if you also decided to enter either.

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/9/2017 7:45:00 PM Hello hath no fury like a woman scorned! Utterly fantastic poem! :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/9/2017 11:18:00 PM U flatter me u darling man. Would almost restore a woman's faith in the weaker sex.x