L Milton Hankins Poet Rhyme

I Wandered Through the Garden

I wandered through the garden weary
Tracing her steps among the roses,
Feeling her presence here I grew teary
The scent of her perfume fondly reposes.
Though she no longer tends the flowers
Or walks these paths worn by her feet,
She tends blossoms now in ivory towers
Waits patiently until once again we meet.

written October 22, 2021

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Lindsay Laurie October 23, 2021 at 9:32 PM Hello Milton ... a lovely tribute indeed and a fine verse to read, although sad - thanks Milton - Lindsay L Milton Hankins October 24, 2021 at 9:31 AM Thank you, Lindsay, for reading my poem and writing such a sweet response.

Gershon Wolf October 23, 2021 at 8:27 PM Poignant, Milt. And the sweetness overcomes the sadness. The wait, not only worth it, but increases the anticipation. Lovely penned, Gershon L Milton Hankins October 23, 2021 at 8:54 PM Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate your kind thoughts. I think more of Deb as I go into this season. She embarked on her journey Thanksgiving week (November 20) 2018.

Caren Krutsinger October 23, 2021 at 1:53 AM She is watching too; she senses it when you are in her garden, Hank. L Milton Hankins October 23, 2021 at 1:36 PM Thank you so much, Caren. Your thoughtful comment brought tears to my eyes.

Shirley Hawkins October 22, 2021 at 5:57 PM Lovely sentiments. The people you truly love are always near in spirit. Comforting last two lines of poem. Have a good day, Milt. L Milton Hankins October 22, 2021 at 7:14 PM I truly believe that, Shirley. Thanks so much for your kind thoughts.

Tom Cunningham October 22, 2021 at 10:33 AM Even after they have gone their spirit lives on in your heart and memories. Tom L Milton Hankins October 22, 2021 at 10:33 AM That's so true, Tom. Thank you.