Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Senryu

I Walk Like King

I walk like King
least bothered who is King
worry slaves King too

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By Hitendra Mehta
May 2011

For Members contest - "Whatever" by Brian Strand

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Anne Rutherford May 26, 2011 at 8:51 AM Great haiku Hitendra , we all would end up with good posture if we walked like kings . Good luck!! Anne

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2011 at 6:58 PM An interesting one, Hitendra,from a king's point of view. Wish I could be a queen, but for only one day. Too much responsibility!!

Manouchka Doreus May 16, 2011 at 9:44 AM that is the truth...

Carolyn Devonshire May 14, 2011 at 10:39 AM Witty and profound as well, Hitendra. Much to ponder here. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet May 14, 2011 at 7:31 AM A good message here Hitendra.Enjoyed.Thanks for your congratulatory message at my page...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 14, 2011 at 6:27 AM Words to make one reflect Hitendra my friend.. like the inference of this one and good luck in the contest ..luv.. am sure Brian will luv this piece..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 14, 2011 at 4:48 AM Lovely entry to the contest - creative and humorous, Hitendra