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I walk like King

I walk like King least bothered who is King worry slaves King too ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By Hitendra Mehta May 2011 For Members contest - "Whatever" by Brian Strand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 5/26/2011 8:51:00 AM
Great haiku Hitendra , we all would end up with good posture if we walked like kings . Good luck!! Anne
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:58:00 PM
An interesting one, Hitendra,from a king's point of view. Wish I could be a queen, but for only one day. Too much responsibility!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:44:00 AM
that is the truth...
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:39:00 AM
Witty and profound as well, Hitendra. Much to ponder here. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2011 7:31:00 AM
A good message here Hitendra.Enjoyed.Thanks for your congratulatory message at my page...
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Date: 5/14/2011 6:27:00 AM
Words to make one reflect Hitendra my friend.. like the inference of this one and good luck in the contest ..luv.. am sure Brian will luv this piece..
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:48:00 AM
Lovely entry to the contest - creative and humorous, Hitendra
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