I Walk

I walk amidst all these people
Contemplating in thought I stare
I walk entranced, my mind so rapt
As if I were not even there

Across crowds of so many
Of all colors, of all faces
The Western, the Eastern
Personalities in all races
 
I see the thin and fat
I see the short and tall
In shapes and sizes
Beauty varies in all

Some stroll with smiles
Of the old and blue
Others in peevish laughter
Of youth and hue

Dressed in diverse styles, 
Some dim, some flare
I walk by women in beauty veiled
And others that walk half-bare 

In some I see despair
In others I find insight
Some, I just walk by
With not much visible to sight

I walk amidst all these people
Each one to life a strand
I walk in thought, in masses
And I simply don’t understand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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King Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 2:01 PM
I see you are a watcher,Farah. It's a great source of inspiration for a poet - as this poem demonstrates so well! Exam time is over now, so go have fun till the results come in ...
Neshat Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 1:31 AM
i like your poem
Townsend Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Nice rhyme and flow. Great writing! Happy Birthday! I look forward to reading more of your writing. Smiles from Lolita
Kelly Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Happy Birthday , Ty1...... Have a souper-day !! ....
Derequito Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 11:22 PM
There's not much to understand, Farah, it's just that people are different from each other, that's all. Regards, Fred. (P.S. Next time you watch people go by again and you see a good-looking man, that would be me!!! LOL)
Rhinem Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 8:23 PM
...."Very Wonderful Write Dear Young Lady!:)~And as always, "My Love & Warmth To 'You & Your Loves,' Always, John!!!"~"Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day Dear Farah~Bye!:)
Rhinem Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 8:17 PM
....I truly liked Your searching amid introspect here Farah~And yes, life can sometimes seem a bit overwhelming; when considering all of the intricacies within the mazes of its vastness'....Yet, again, time will help "Your Precious Self," somewhat within these areas as time goes by!?~Until then dear young lady~do Your best to shake the night of it all~and to hold onto the bright; until, it becomes even brighter!:)....cont....
Rhinem Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 8:04 PM
Smile~But time will help You to understand even more, what I already believe that within many degrees, you somehow do understand!?:) That the world is just one big Alien ship; and that we all, have been abducted~Smile~"Hello Precious & Gifted Young Farah Chamma!":) I hope you didn't mind my little bit of humor here!? Although, I am not so sure, that I was completely wrong? Well, at least within certain ways!? If you know what I mean?!....cont....
Adeite Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:13 AM
people are different in their ideas, ideals and ideologies... we need to appreciate our diversitied. in them lies some sence of unity. great you! my arabian wonder. Adeleke
Al-Khalili Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 12:03 PM
Observation. The way to secretly judge yet not to hurt those who oppose your eyes and mind. What you see, you understand, yet what you are seeing, seems not to make sense at all. Beautiful, I do the same once and awhile. "Beauty varies in all" Indeed my friend, it surely does. Love the rhyming.
Tugaff Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Hi Farah, watching and obserbing is one way of showing intelligence. Nice work. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
P. Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 6:45 AM
your feelings & observation well expressed ... and wonderfully done! ~ Arany
Swanson Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 6:13 AM
I like the silent observation, I picture someone walking through the crowds and observing so many habits, customs, each person with their own unique life story, their own mysteries in their heart. Nice depth and imagery.
Winter Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 5:43 AM
This is an interesting write Farah. Yes, people will confuse you, that's for sure. Never dull though to watch, as Kristin writes. Sometimes disturbing, that's for sure. I prefer the country and nature to people watching. : ) Love, Shar
Kelly Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 4:26 AM
The talented M/S Chamma , watching people , watching Farah , being observed by Tyone ... Clever piece .....
Reynolds Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 1:52 AM
Pepople watching is never dull. beautiful poem here, love, Kristin
Strand Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 1:23 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour to this one Farah.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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