I Walk

I walk amidst all these people
Contemplating in thought I stare
I walk entranced, my mind so rapt
As if I were not even there

Across crowds of so many
Of all colors, of all faces
The Western, the Eastern
Personalities in all races
 
I see the thin and fat
I see the short and tall
In shapes and sizes
Beauty varies in all

Some stroll with smiles
Of the old and blue
Others in peevish laughter
Of youth and hue

Dressed in diverse styles, 
Some dim, some flare
I walk by women in beauty veiled
And others that walk half-bare 

In some I see despair
In others I find insight
Some, I just walk by
With not much visible to sight

I walk amidst all these people
Each one to life a strand
I walk in thought, in masses
And I simply don’t understand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/18/2009 2:01:00 PM
I see you are a watcher,Farah. It's a great source of inspiration for a poet - as this poem demonstrates so well! Exam time is over now, so go have fun till the results come in ...
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:31:00 AM
i like your poem
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:47:00 AM
Nice rhyme and flow. Great writing! Happy Birthday! I look forward to reading more of your writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:18:00 AM
Happy Birthday , Ty1...... Have a souper-day !! ....
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Date: 4/5/2009 11:22:00 PM
There's not much to understand, Farah, it's just that people are different from each other, that's all. Regards, Fred. (P.S. Next time you watch people go by again and you see a good-looking man, that would be me!!! LOL)
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Date: 3/30/2009 8:23:00 PM
...."Very Wonderful Write Dear Young Lady!:)~And as always, "My Love & Warmth To 'You & Your Loves,' Always, John!!!"~"Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day Dear Farah~Bye!:)
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Date: 3/30/2009 8:17:00 PM
....I truly liked Your searching amid introspect here Farah~And yes, life can sometimes seem a bit overwhelming; when considering all of the intricacies within the mazes of its vastness'....Yet, again, time will help "Your Precious Self," somewhat within these areas as time goes by!?~Until then dear young lady~do Your best to shake the night of it all~and to hold onto the bright; until, it becomes even brighter!:)....cont....
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Date: 3/30/2009 8:04:00 PM
Smile~But time will help You to understand even more, what I already believe that within many degrees, you somehow do understand!?:) That the world is just one big Alien ship; and that we all, have been abducted~Smile~"Hello Precious & Gifted Young Farah Chamma!":) I hope you didn't mind my little bit of humor here!? Although, I am not so sure, that I was completely wrong? Well, at least within certain ways!? If you know what I mean?!....cont....
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:13:00 AM
people are different in their ideas, ideals and ideologies... we need to appreciate our diversitied. in them lies some sence of unity. great you! my arabian wonder. Adeleke
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Date: 3/23/2009 12:03:00 PM
Observation. The way to secretly judge yet not to hurt those who oppose your eyes and mind. What you see, you understand, yet what you are seeing, seems not to make sense at all. Beautiful, I do the same once and awhile. "Beauty varies in all" Indeed my friend, it surely does. Love the rhyming.
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Date: 3/21/2009 3:23:00 PM
Hi Farah, watching and obserbing is one way of showing intelligence. Nice work. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 3/20/2009 6:45:00 AM
your feelings & observation well expressed ... and wonderfully done! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/20/2009 6:13:00 AM
I like the silent observation, I picture someone walking through the crowds and observing so many habits, customs, each person with their own unique life story, their own mysteries in their heart. Nice depth and imagery.
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Date: 3/20/2009 5:43:00 AM
This is an interesting write Farah. Yes, people will confuse you, that's for sure. Never dull though to watch, as Kristin writes. Sometimes disturbing, that's for sure. I prefer the country and nature to people watching. : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 3/20/2009 4:26:00 AM
The talented M/S Chamma , watching people , watching Farah , being observed by Tyone ... Clever piece .....
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:52:00 AM
Pepople watching is never dull. beautiful poem here, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:23:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour to this one Farah.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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