I Waited For the Sun

I waited ‘til I saw the sun, 
The sun just slipped a note below my door                                                          
No warm arrival, as before, 
The fragile light of empty air, and cold rejection on the floor

The summer days are gone too soon  
I was a little girl with nothing wrong, eyes wide open without a sound  
In the empty room that once smelled sweetly
Now only left to face the gloom

I will walk a mile, just to feel the edge
Some place low enough to step right in
I can’t stop my self from falling, I can’t stop myself from calling
But my voice is weary, can hardly speak at all

I pick up a stone that I cast to the sky, hoping for some kind of sign
The wind is gone, asleep at dawn
The long day is over…I’m feeling tired
The embers burn on, with no reprise
The sun will rise, …again you say?
But what do you say, when it’s all gone away?
I’m on my knees empty, you humble me Lord
I’ve gone too far,  …., you can take me away…



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For Tracie’s Contest: Sing a Song poem
Songs from Norah Jones:   Following lyrics are from:
                                         
“Don’t Know Why”( I waited ‘til I saw the sun)
“Feeling the Same Way” (The sun just slipped its note below my door)
 “Shoot the Moon” (Summer days are gone too soon)
“Seven Years” (A little girl with nothing wrong)
“Toes” (Walked a mile just to feel the edge)
“Lonestar” (pick up a stone that I cast to the sky)
“In the Morning” (I can hardly speak at all)
“The Long Day is Over”  (The long day is over, I’m feeling tired)
“Humble Me”  ( I’m on my knees empty, you humble me Lord)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/27/2012 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your win... nicely done like it... Take care, Cheryl
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Date: 3/27/2012 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations,Carrie!!!Fabulous job!!! I really like this!! Well Done...well put together! Brava! big huggsss,love~deb
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Date: 3/27/2012 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:44:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a super stunning win for these choice selection of muscial melodies ..luv..
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:52:00 AM
congrats on your win cory
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:50:00 AM
Congrats on you win, Carrie. Impressive write, my friend. Nice going. luv and huggs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:54:00 PM
oh, my gosh, you put these together so well, I did not even know it was that song contest. Way to do it, Carrie. a sure winner.
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Date: 3/11/2012 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful lyrics from Norah Jones, Carrie, and I love how you tied them together! I enjoyed the read. Blessings, Rhonda
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