I Waited

I waited on your conscience to come to your rescue
For your veins to come alive with life’s blood flow
I wait for the repair of your heart’s oil pipeline
Broken spilling crude at our relationship’s door

The Bible says “Meekly wait and murmur not” 
But I’ve waited beyond wait can’t stand the weight
Isn’t it time you realize the “Stephen” syndrome is over
This moral self-mutilation is not cutting it anymore 

I’ve waited with anticipation for you to come true
So we could start over with the slate wiped clean 
I held the weight of shame of ridicule and deep pain
But nothing seems to faze you do you even feel

I waited for redemption from loneliness and despair
My heart is saddened you don't even care
I won’t let your sad cold stone crusted heart	
Spoil my chance of having a brand new start
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Banks Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 11:44 PM
"This moral self-mutilation is not cutting it anymore." I loved it!!!
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:05 PM
One love Dev!
A   Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:29 AM
joy... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Tnx PD my friend!
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Joy. Love, Carol
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Tnx Carol...blessings!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:17 AM
congrats Joy on a dynamic write and win luv... been under the weather so not been on lately..now enjoying winning poems..
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:07 PM
So sorry LM... praying for you.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Joy xx
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:07 PM
Tnx Mandy!
Rozario Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 12:25 AM
congrats on your win Joy...enjoyed your poem.
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:08 PM
Tnx Jonas!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Excellent, Joy, and very powerful! If it's true, good for you!! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Appreciate it Rhonda!
Ruebel Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Well done Joy...Congratulations on your win my dear. As Always, Shar
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Thanks Sharon!
Williams Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Joy congrats on your win, good metaphors...I like a lot..David
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Lovbe and Blessings David!
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Powerful and moving written....new day, new start. - like it, well done Joy. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:12 PM
Tnx Anne Lise
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Great write about a bad relationship..Sad that these things happen in life..I hope just about the topic and that you have not experienced it..Great topic and presentation...Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking time to comment on my work..Sara
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Thanks Sara...SP M!
Grisetti Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 8:38 PM
A deep and touching poem you have written.
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:05 PM
Tnx Joann!
Gooden Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Be it resolved that... Strong words, Joy; love the first stanza.
Wellington Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Blessings..tnx!
Palmer Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 7:18 PM
great write strong minded woman,love without substance is a drag,wish you the best Joy
Wellington Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 8:02 PM
Tnx Rich!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 12:42 AM
powerfully penned Joy with such fervency and strong vocabulary.. waiting for another to take hold of the truth of life is long hard road so we must trust God and move on luv.. your verses show how loving u are and how much faith u possess.. we must enjoy each day given .. luv..
Wellington Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Thanks LS...blessed love to you
Simpson Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:36 PM
I love your poem, Joy. I especially enjoyed the play on words.
Wellington Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Tnx Brandi...blessings.
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