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I Tried So Hard

I Tried So Hard I tried so hard.  I tried my best. I gave you my all,  and now there's nothing left. You stole my heart, then tore it in two. Now I'm falling apart, and don't know what to do. Divided by decisions, burned by the fire. Confused by your words. Tempted by desire. I'm living in the present. My mind is on the past. Not knowing what I'll lose. Not knowing what will last. Blinded by fear. Drowning in doubt. Struggling to be free. Looking for a way out. I Tried So Hard

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Date: 6/16/2024 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:48:00 PM
JESSICA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:33:00 PM
- So heartbreaking sad - Lovely written, Jessica - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jessica Wentworth
Date: 4/26/2015 2:47:00 PM
Thanks hug back

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