I Tossed a Poem Away Today

I tossed a poem away today
a crumpled wad of tortured thought
it shivers on a city street
trampled under passing feet
no longer has it eyes to feed
poetically a tumbleweed
broken, twisted, lonesome thought
wondering why it was tossed. 


John G. Lawless
©8/3/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Herrick Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 7:53 AM
I feel that the words become almost an entity, myself. Anything in the process, unused, was still instrumental. Not put in gutter or shelfed. Then to be in gutter ballet, inconsequential, kicked around, lonely afraid? Maybe burn unused poetry and send it on a warriors-River- pyre. Or eat it, bitter in the mouth but in the stomach, sweet as honey. Spice o soulfire. Great thoughts of hearts trying to find words and that Sacredness in a clever way or real way, here. Enjoyed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Hello John Lawless, so why did you toss the poem away? Just wondering. Have a nice evening my friend.
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