I Thought You Were the One

Since the first day I saw you
I knew you were the one
But it would soon be over
Just as soon as it began
And everytime I close my eyes 
I see your beautiful face
But it still feels like something is out of place


I thought you were the one I could depend on
I thought you were the one
But now I see I was wrong

I thought I was in love with you
I was going to be with you forever
My dreams were coming true
When we were engaged together

But it all fell apart
When you broke my heart
But I still think I'm the one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Williams Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 9:07 PM
what's with all of these people giving more comments so you can make the top 100. do I smell cheating, stuffing the ballot boxes. I have been looking over everyone's post comments and that seems to go on a lot. but you did write a great poem, but only one comment is really needed.
Gray Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 5:19 PM
i doub't if you could D: i wanna see you too
Gray Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 5:01 PM
YAY MEH I GET CONTROLLED! XD
Loving Iii Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 3:17 PM
it a faze, it's all a phase your going through. jhl
Gray Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 1:44 PM
Love chuu 2! how do i add friends?
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