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I Thought You Were the One

Since the first day I saw you I knew you were the one But it would soon be over Just as soon as it began And everytime I close my eyes I see your beautiful face But it still feels like something is out of place I thought you were the one I could depend on I thought you were the one But now I see I was wrong I thought I was in love with you I was going to be with you forever My dreams were coming true When we were engaged together But it all fell apart When you broke my heart But I still think I'm the one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/10/2008 9:07:00 PM
what's with all of these people giving more comments so you can make the top 100. do I smell cheating, stuffing the ballot boxes. I have been looking over everyone's post comments and that seems to go on a lot. but you did write a great poem, but only one comment is really needed.
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Date: 9/10/2008 5:19:00 PM
i doub't if you could D: i wanna see you too
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Date: 9/10/2008 5:01:00 PM
YAY MEH I GET CONTROLLED! XD
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Date: 9/10/2008 3:17:00 PM
it a faze, it's all a phase your going through. jhl
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Date: 9/10/2008 1:44:00 PM
Love chuu 2! how do i add friends?
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