I Think of Your Loss

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~~ I THINK OF YOUR LOSS ~~~

WHEN MY LIFE BEFORE ME CRUMBLES
AND I THINK I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE
WHEN MY HEARTACHE OVERWHELMS ME
LIKE SO MANY TIMES BEFORE..
                             
ITS THEN I THINK OF MY YOU MY FRIEND
AND ALL THAT YOU ARE GOING THROUGH,
AS YOU TRY TO FIND THE ANSWERS.
WHY LIFE HAS TO BE SO CRUEL.
                           
YOU HAD TO LOSE YOUR ONLY SON BRO
I KNOW YOU HEART IS SO TORN,
I DONT HAVE ANY ANSWERS FOR YOU
I JUST CAN HELP YOU MOURN.
                          
LIFE CAN BE VERY BAD SOMETIMES
AND IT TEARS OUR SPIRITS DOWN
BUT I PROMISE YOU FROM MY HEART
THE ANSWERS WILL BE FOUND.
                          
I NEVER WALKED YET IN YOUR SHOES
BUT I FEEL YOUR PAIN,THE SAME,
AND I KNOW THAT GOD WILL COMFORT
WHEN YOU TRUST IN HIM AGAIN.
                             
SOMEDAY SOON WE ARE GOING HOME
A PLACE WHERE THERE WILL BE NO PAIN
THAT WHEN YOU WILL SEE YOUR SON AGAIN
AND NO MORE WILL THERE BE BLAME.
                              
YOU MUST TRY TO LIVE BY THE PROMISE
THAT WITH JESUS HE LIVES TODAY BRO,
AND LIVE AND DO THE BEST WE CAN
DOWN HERE ON EARTH BELOW.
                            
WRITTEN BY ANN HART MAY 2ND 2004
FOR MY FRIEND,AND BROTHER IN JESUS
FRANK CANADA,WHO STILL GRIEVES FOR
THE TRAGIC LOST OF A DEAR SON 29
 
 
YOU NEVER HAVE A WAY OF KNOWING WHAT LIES AHEAD IN YOUR FUTURE
SINCE I WROTE THIS POEM IN 2004 FOR A DEAR FRIEND OF MINE I LOST MY OWN SON 2 
YEARS AGO TO MURDER IN SCARBROUGH ONT.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/7/2009 6:09:00 PM
Ann you are so right at a time like this we dont need answers we need shoulders to cry on.
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